Argonath RPG - A World of its own

GTA:SA => SA:MP - San Andreas Multiplayer => SA:MP General => Topic started by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 09:53:48 pm

Title: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 09:53:48 pm

Hello please enjoy :)

Post your feedback below

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Collin on May 29, 2009, 09:57:03 pm

glad to be the first download, Reading now.

Quote

Player's of the week
SA:MP
Collin_Hawk
Player has good roleplay skills but more importantly has been helping the admin
team a lot by helping new players to learn about the server. Hardly ever
rulebreaks, probably one of the most gentle players ingame. That is a quality
which is hard to find these days.
Nominated by: Cutt3r

Loving that bit ;)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: MikeUK on May 29, 2009, 10:00:23 pm

Ma Interview was included.

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: The_Wolf on May 29, 2009, 10:03:00 pm

Looks great!

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Joey_DeRossi on May 29, 2009, 10:07:55 pm

Best of luck with this ;)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 10:18:00 pm

Thank you for your feedback,

Next weeks will be more tidier and should be more exciting :).

I hope you guys enjoy your free Coupons.

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Aksel on May 29, 2009, 10:18:38 pm

haha, I helped him to the sea :O

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Romeo on May 29, 2009, 10:29:44 pm

A few suggestions:
-Add an index, listing all the articles and numbering them, and so when you click on them you are directed to it.
-Some more photoshopping
-Uniform Interview's (Make them all look the same)
-A photo page perhaps? (Viewers can submit photo's and AE management can chose a "Photo of the Week"?)

Cant think of anything else atm, but altogether.. #1 Was a Success. Well done guys :D

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 10:32:02 pm

Thanks :)

And when do you ever click urls on a newspaper? lol

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: David_Omid on May 29, 2009, 10:48:44 pm

I will make some advertisements and stories for the next one, need to promote our group more :P

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Vince on May 29, 2009, 10:49:02 pm

I LOVE IT! Greatly structured, perfect people to interview, bringing the roleplay of Argonath to a whole new level! The coupons are VERY creative, and the front page.. is SEXY.

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Romeo on May 29, 2009, 10:50:12 pm

Quote from: Vaio on May 29, 2009, 10:32:02 pm

Thanks :)

And when do you ever click urls on a newspaper? lol

We might aswell take advantage of the Interactive side of it, as It is on the internet anyway.  Use it to our advantage :D

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Caltson on May 29, 2009, 10:54:39 pm

i enjoy reading papers like that, well done, keep up the good job :)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 10:56:12 pm

Thanks everyone for your creative feedback

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: MikeUK on May 29, 2009, 11:13:23 pm

P.S - Entered Competition and I am right!

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 29, 2009, 11:15:50 pm

Quote from: MikeUK on May 29, 2009, 11:13:23 pm

P.S - Entered Competition and I am right!

I can confirm i do not have a email from you

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: MikeUK on May 29, 2009, 11:48:06 pm

Quote from: Vaio on May 29, 2009, 11:15:50 pm

I can confirm i do not have a email from you

Sent it through wrong account [flat-mate's] So I resent via mine.

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: MyleS on May 30, 2009, 12:18:04 am

Its really brilliant , i love it !! Hope you guys continue doing this !

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: brainiac220 on May 30, 2009, 12:22:51 am

Wow, my first apparence in a cover  :lol:  !  You did a really good job with this magazine guy's !! Congratz to the press team , keep it up !!  :) :)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Fruity on May 30, 2009, 12:26:49 am

Thanks for all the feedback, we appreciate it all so much and are glad how our first edition has turned out.

[AV]Jonny
Argonath Express
Head Journalist

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Jordan on May 30, 2009, 03:22:33 am

Yeah, great feedback for a first time show, we hope to improve on our next issue with a better design, hopefully.

[ALS]Jordan
Argonath Express
Head Journalist

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Fido Dido on May 30, 2009, 03:59:00 am

Oh my GAWD.
Realy cool x.x
I read everything. I love Argonath Express :P

Quote from: Aksel on May 29, 2009, 10:18:38 pm

haha, I helped him to the sea :O

Me too x.x

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: cumbia_chorra on May 30, 2009, 07:48:59 am

Awesome work :)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Duncan_James on May 30, 2009, 07:58:53 am

Wonderful and great job ;)

That's the best work i've ever seen

Keep working on , guys

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Bianconeri on May 30, 2009, 08:47:12 am

looks really good

but i dont agree with the vehicle reviews  ;)
cheetah: superb handling, should be horrible,
same for infernus  :cool:

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Frank_Hawk on May 30, 2009, 09:21:30 am

Company name: Rage Incorporated [RI] and its subsidiaries
Registration authentication: 517898
Attorney representing: Frank Hawk, Chief Executive of Rage Incorporated [RI]
Subject: Argonath Express

Rage Incorporated [RI] considers the Argonath Express with the utmost respect for the articles expressed within this publication. Rage Incorporated Media [RIm] have expressed their positive attitude to releasing a Rage Incorporated [RI] business zone, which covers the Rage Incorporated [RI] business model and how we are strategically expanding. It will also contain an competitors analysis zone which will highlight what our major competitors, ALS and Z Corporation are doing to expand their own scopes.

If you are willing to accept this proposal, please contact Frank Hawk at the temporary head office of Rage Incorporated [RI] at Rage Inc Oil [RIo]

Regards,
Frank Hawk
Chief Executive Officer of Rage Incorporated [RI]
Legal consultation provided by Argonath’s most professional law firm (Rage Incorporated Litigation)


OOC : Jake, a truely tremendous effort of bringing interactive news into Argonath. This will allow people to grab a key grasp of what others groups of RPers are doing, and whether we could adopt any new methods to improve our own RP. This paper will be a asset to the Argonath and I sincerely commend you on a major task well done.   :)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Winters on May 30, 2009, 09:29:00 am

Omg, this is fantastic jake! Really nice done, keep up the great work man! I love it! Well done!

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Pancher on May 30, 2009, 12:59:38 pm

Good News story, i really liked it, Keep it up :)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 31, 2009, 11:12:00 am

Thanks guy's

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: MarioRinarri on May 31, 2009, 02:40:15 pm

Too many empty spaces in each page... Try making each page look full..
Less images, more text.. Like this:
(http://www.museumoffloridahistory.com/mfh/exhibits/civilwar/images/newspaper1.gif)

Title: Re: Argonath Express Issue #1 2009
Post by: Dr J. Cohen on May 31, 2009, 02:54:28 pm

(http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/836/agony.jpg)

Start the subject with Agony: