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Title: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:23:01 pm
Maybe u wrote ure own song =) then u can post here.. =)
I wrote this song for a friend of mine who died The song calles: Dear god

Strophe: 1
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It was a quite evening
When i saw this message.
Shes dead please dont write no more
I couldnt belive it
But in this this moment
i realize
That she
would never come back

Chorus:
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Dear god,
Why do u take this girl
out of my life..
With who i can talk now
about my problems
She was so young and so Pretty
Dear god,
Why did u took my angel.?

Strophe: 2
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I was crying all night
And i was thinkin about u
I wish i could say goodbye
and talk to u the last time
And i thought
maybe we
see us
in the heaven again

chorus...

Bridge:
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ohhh

I think of u
Every minute and second
I miss u
my heartgirl
but i have to say

The end tones:
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Dear god,
Why do u take this girl
out of my life
With who i can talk now
about my problems
she was so young and so pretty
Dear god,
why did u took my angel?

Rest in peace Keezy
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Traser on July 21, 2009, 11:24:44 pm
<3.

Lovely ;)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jserg on July 21, 2009, 11:27:15 pm
Could be an awesome Metalcore song  ;)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:27:48 pm
thanks  :redface:
Metalcore? Omg :D its a ballad
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jserg on July 21, 2009, 11:29:48 pm
could be better with screamos and emo singer xD
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Miami on July 21, 2009, 11:31:00 pm
I have written a poem, has quite alot of symbolism behind it. Ill let you work it out.

Carpe Diem

From the crack of dawn, to the close of day.
Do what you wish. Do what you may.
That bright glow from the heavens today,
May pass away, any day.

“Carpe Diem”, I heard him say,
Was to “Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow”.

Do what you can. Do what you want.
Do whatever, while you may.
Time is still a-ticking.
But do not believe these words I say,
as time could run out anyway.

“Seize the Day”, I hear him say,
“Life will not always be this way”.

- Adam Warne, 2009

 :)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jserg on July 21, 2009, 11:31:52 pm
Reminded me "Seize the Day" from Avenged Sevenfold

Nice poem Miami
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:32:35 pm
Very nice Poem Miami =)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Sauron on July 21, 2009, 11:40:28 pm
Far and near
When time was distant
We hoped to be close
But as time got closer
The distance got more
If only there was no time
There would be no distance between us

One month
Time races by slowly
It seems like yesterday I was with you
Until we meet again seems like forever

Different thoughts remain the same
Nothing is really changed
A new life started since I met you

The present shows the past
My plans have not changed
But the future changed forever
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Miami on July 21, 2009, 11:42:13 pm
Far and near
When time was distant
We hoped to be close
But as time got closer
The distance got more
If only there was no time
There would be no distance between us

One month
Time races by slowly
It seems like yesterday I was with you
Until we meet again seems like forever

Different thoughts remain the same
Nothing is really changed
A new life started since I met you

The present shows the past
My plans have not changed
But the future changed forever

Sa...Sau... SAURON?!  :wow:

Holy moly  :bow:

Both those poems/lyrics are brilliant, I really like them, especially 'One Month'  :D
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jubin on July 21, 2009, 11:43:58 pm
To answer your question. Then yes I have written some texts. Mostly short stories that are incomplete but writing is a way for clearing my thoughts.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:44:56 pm
post it =)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jubin on July 21, 2009, 11:49:12 pm
post it =)
These texts are all in Estonian.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:52:14 pm
oohh xD
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: rJCaiG on July 21, 2009, 11:55:55 pm
It's 8am and I'm about to go to a funeral. When i get home I'll put up a couple of mine. :D
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Jubin on July 22, 2009, 12:07:33 am
oohh xD
Yeah. It's like I know I can speak English quite fluently and understand texts what are written in it. For example I am listening Setphen King's "Cell" audio book but to write novels or short stories myself I feel that I need a bigger vocabulary than I have at the moment, or it would look like something that a 10 year old  would have written just because of the sentence's build up and the recurring words.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 22, 2009, 12:08:26 am
ya sometimes i can write songs in german better than in english
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Julian on July 22, 2009, 12:17:35 am
I've been writing rap lyrics, but it sucks, so I won't post it.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: tiderman on July 22, 2009, 12:32:39 am
Hell yeah, I've been writing my own texts.
No song texts or anything, just some causeries of my own life.
It's all in Swedish, plus last year I wrote like every damned day, so it wouldn't fit. On the internets. On this board anyways..

I'm planning to write an autobiography soon. I'll wait till I get a little older and start writing it, so I have something good and long to write. After that I will just add more as the time goes. Dry texts with bad sense of humor. Yeah.. YEAH!!
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Merc on July 22, 2009, 12:54:34 am
I don't write songs, but I have done in the past, I write poems for people though, espesh my mum <3
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: 9r2e5i3k on July 22, 2009, 02:02:33 am
Is the 'text' under my signature image good enough for this topic?
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Miami on July 22, 2009, 02:14:16 am
Is the 'text' under my signature image good enough for this topic?

I guess it still counts as 'text'  :D

Its more of just a motivational quote or something like that, than a poem, or lyrics. But I guess it still counts for this topic.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Alsatian on July 22, 2009, 06:28:24 am
Unchangeable

VERSE 1
You are there when times are rough
I know it's you whom I can trust
You are solid as a rock
And I depend, on you.

You are loyal, you are strong
I knew you would be the one
You are solid as a rock
And you are there, for me.


CHORUS
You are unshakable
You are unbreakable
You are my rock and you will never let me down.
You are unchangeable
You are unmovable
You're always there for me, you make my world go round
And Round.. round.


VERSE 2
You are happy, you are kind
You always bring that warm sunshine
You are always there
And I believe, in you

You are funny, you are smart
I know I'm somewhere in your heart
You've always been the one
And I am there, for you.


CHORUS

VERSE 3
You are unchangeable (you keep me on my feet)
You are unbreakable (you always keep me strong)
You are unmovable (your always there for me)
You are unshakable (I know where belong)


[GUITAR SOLO] (LOL)

CHORUS x2

A song by me and my band. :redface: Not the best, I know, and needs MAJOR editing, but, meh.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BeLLa on July 22, 2009, 10:23:41 am
Ure song is really cooL.. and good =)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BarbarSforza on July 22, 2009, 10:33:15 am
Wow... Awesome Alsatian...

EDIT:  forgot most important again. Yea, i write texts, but they aren't song texts, not poems. Just texts. for school. ;)
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Radagast on July 22, 2009, 11:21:15 am
I write hymns  :redface:
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: rJCaiG on July 22, 2009, 02:01:42 pm
not gonna be home till tomorrow so i might just make one up lol
i guess i'll do a sonnet hehe

Chocolate makes me feel good
It makes me smile
Nice tasting food
Worth driving a mile
Just to get one bite of it
For it to touch your sweet lips
Knowing of it takes no wit
Although it could make you fat at the hips
But when it comes in black or white
You really think how unique chocolate is
Eat it in the day or night
Or while you're taking a whizz
If you agree
Come with me on a shopping spree :rofl:

Made up on the spot, i'm bored and have nothing better to do lol

Post Merge: July 22, 2009, 02:18:35 pm
still bored. here's another one about uhh, the sun....

The sun,
it is very bright
Under it children like to run
It gives us sight
It gives is vitamins
It helps out trees
Helps us see rubbish bins
Best of all, comes with no fees
But it can sometimes be hot
And hard to look at
Some rivers are left to rot
Without as much as a bit of shot
But the sun is pree' cool
And gives us an excuse to go in a swimming pool

:rofl: i am so bored
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: BarbarSforza on July 22, 2009, 02:32:02 pm
LMAO GiacJr!!! :lol:
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: rJCaiG on July 22, 2009, 03:05:54 pm
still bored -_- so i might do a few more for the lulz...
one..i might do saying about my day...one..what i wore...and one....on a dog thats keeping me up at night :x

ok first one.

Today was the final farewell
Tears and laughs were heard all day
The atmosphere was not too swell
The sun decided to beam a ray
Funerals are not too fun
But eventually they must be had
Very professionally run
Not too many would call them rad
But they help to clear the mind
Of all negativity
The guest book was happily signed
Done ever so calmly
Grandpa is now gone
But nothing is wrong.


k cool..next


Today I wore some pretty cool shoes
The brand was Vans
Everyone knew I had some clues
About what was on my hands
My pants were long
Black and thin
Far from wrong
Didn't easily cling
But the highlight of my clothes
was my really rad shirt
It made all dem hoes
want to come flirt
lol im only joking
no i haven't been smoking

bahahah boredem sucks :(
ok this is the one i feel so strongly about


This fucking shit dog
Has kept me awake
Wakes me up when there is still fog
I want to poison it with a god damn snake
Why the fuck does it keep barking
I'll never find out
And if I ever farking
Find out where it is, i'll beat it up its ugly snout
But I guess it's kind of soothing
Wait, no it's not, wtf am i saying
I want to shoot it while cruising
And spraying
My AK47
It better suffer in heaven.


LOL it's kept me up the past 3 nights until 1:30am :( I hate it. I'll probably end up doing more, I still have 1 and a half hours I have to find something to do in haha, taking requests! :D
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: Boxy on July 23, 2009, 03:14:47 am
Looks like alot of pseudo- emo shenanigans.  Poems aren't my thing.  I prefer writing abstract stories :P.
Title: Re: Have u wrote ure own Texts?
Post by: rJCaiG on July 23, 2009, 03:41:55 am
Looks like alot of pseudo- emo shenanigans.  Poems aren't my thing.  I prefer writing abstract stories :P.

LOL, mine are nowhere near emo!
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