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Title: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 11, 2010, 11:10:51 am
Hello and welcome to Argonath's Official Weekly Writing Competition.
Each week you will get the chance to write up a story in line with the rules I set out later, and the winner will be announced every Saturday. The winner will receive a sum of money ingame and recognition in this post.

Winners:
Week 32: Georgio Ancelotti (https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1Yt4baktoO_lYQYKPswVEz9lWG7uPU1cyKgGkrFcZSnQ&hl=en)
Week 33: [ADF]Carlos_Gates (https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=13Pyh9vJRuh9rGhwYThVxH92NgiePSbnnIHL3gEJLA6s&hl=en#)
Week 34: Sarah Patterson (https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0Adme7e_rxe2jZGhxcW04bWdfMWY2cHo4ZGdt&hl=en)
Week 35:
Week 37:
Week 38:
Week 39:

Week 40: Green_Thumb (https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=1L2i0zos8QH3SSTHadbZuKt2oXoH-eFl_ds5_LCwGIECnSGvEp8qMv2GeJSr6&hl=en)
Week 41:
Week 42:
Week 43:


Week 42 2010
Type of writing: A narrative.
Theme: Fantasy
Word Limits: Maximum of 3000 words. Must be at least 200 words.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 23rd October
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only, due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected]  with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc) or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
Make up a name for your poem and put it up the top
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.
Good luck!



Hints:
Here lie some general hints that you should follow to have better chances at your story winning (All apply for every week; some do not apply for POEMS.):

Week 41 2010
Type of writing: A narrative.
Theme: Adventure
Word Limits: Maximum of 3000 words. Must be at least 200 words.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 16th October
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only, due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected]  with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc) or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
Make up a name for your poem and put it up the top
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.
Good luck!


Week 40 2010
Type of writing: A poem, where the end of each line must rhyme with the above.
eg.
GiacJr likes to read and write
One thing he doesn't enjoy is to fight
His friends mean the world to him
And his body build is quite slim
Theme: Anything.
Word Limits: Maximum of 30 lines.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 8th October.
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only, due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected]  with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc) or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
Make up a name for your poem and put it up the top
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.
Good luck!


Week 34 2010

Theme: A Narrative (made up story) with a love theme!
Word Requirment: Must be at least 400 words long.
Word Limit: Must be lower than 3000 words.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 28th August
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected] with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc(xsomething weird or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
Make up a name for your story and put it up the top
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.
Good luck!


Week 33 2010

Theme: A Narrative (made up story) with a horror theme!
Word Requirment: Must be at least 400 words long.
Word Limit: Must be lower than 3000 words.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 21st August
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected] with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc) or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
Make up a name for your story and put it up the top
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.
Good luck!



Week 32 2010
Theme: What you love about your Country
Word Requirment: Must be at least 250 words long.
Word Limit: Must be lower than 3000 words.
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 14th August, so Week 33 can begin on the 15th to end on the 21st.
Language: Unfortunately must be in English only due to my inability to read other languages.
Other Rules: Must be submitted via email to [email protected] with the story attached as a Microsoft Word document (.doc) or a Text Document (.txt) - attempting to spread viruses or any other malicious intentions to this email will result in heavy punishment on Argonath...
You must write the name of your country at the top of the story.
You must sign with your name at the end so I know who's is who's - I don't advise signing someone else's name, as if they win, you won't get the prize  :)
Anonymous stories will not be accepted.



And I suppose I'll give you an example. Note that this isn't overly amazing as I'm writing it up really quickly...

Australia
I love Australia. I truthfully believe it's one of the freest, most prosperous and most gorgeous countries in the World.
I love the fact that we can enjoy strolls through ever lasting beaches, take a dip in the beautifully temperatured waters, walk around in amazing bushland looking for trouble and get faced with unbelievable adventures every single day.
I love that we have a strong Government, a strong police force and, most importantly, a strong individual voice in our Government at a Federal level.
I love our ability to access all the latest gadgets and toys with ease, with thousands of stores around the Country that all have an equal opportunity to make their mark in the world - to make money, to provide their services, to be there for the community.
I love that we can walk outside without fear of being attacked, raped or verbally abused, as occurs in some third world countries.
I love the fact that we have an amazing international image in which we are recognised as one of the most generous countries with Aid, disaster relief and environmental solutions.
I love that we are are provided with every facility under the sun by our Local Councils and State Governments, that we have good schools with good teachers and good curriculum's with content that children in some countries would die to learn.
I love that every single inhabitant in this country is proud of who they are, where they live and are happy to let everyone know that it is so. Our Legal system is one of the most advanced in the world, with numerous ways of finding out about laws, numerous ways of using the law to it's fullest and countless opportunities to use the legal system, which is designed to that ANYONE can use it - regardless of age, sex, disabilities or sexual orientation. We have so many ways to ensure that this country is fair that it baffles me how anyone could want to live anywhere else.

These are all the reasons I love my country and I am happy and proud to call it home.

Written by Giac Junior

That's just ~315 words, but it gets to the point, it outlines my views, it goes briefly into everything I write and it uses literary techniques. Although I didn't use humour, I recommend trying. For the benefit of some, I have changed my text colour to show you the structure.
Bolded Green = Introduction
Bolded Purple = Body
Bolded Orange = Conclusion

Get writing!

NOTE:
Stupid entries that are an attempt to be hurr durr funny will be deleted and you will be banned from this competition for every week. Do NOT post your stories here. This topic is for discussion only. Posting your story will have it deleted and you will be banned from the week's competition with the ability to write again the week after.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 32 of 2010
Post by: Georgio on August 11, 2010, 01:05:45 pm
Submitted mine :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 32 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 12, 2010, 02:13:24 pm
And I forgot to say - first prize is 100k.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 32 of 2010
Post by: Georgio on August 13, 2010, 05:52:08 pm
How many submitions have you had so far?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 15, 2010, 03:56:32 am
Congratulations Georgio for winning week 32 of 2010! Contact me ingame for the prize money!
Week 33 is now up, looking forward to entries!!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Mikro on August 15, 2010, 12:19:13 pm
Giaccccc.. Why not post the stories, once the week is finished? Then everyone can read them.. else they wrote the stories for nothing, since stories are te be read.  :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 15, 2010, 01:40:05 pm
The winner's story gets put up! :D Click Georgio's name :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Emre on August 15, 2010, 07:34:49 pm
ma storry b betteh :<
Kidding,Very nice Text Georgio :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 15, 2010, 07:43:43 pm
Sorry for the stupid question, when does the Week 33 start  :lol:
Can we email the story now, if we wrote it? Why limiting us with 3k words?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 15, 2010, 10:58:01 pm
Yes. Send now. And 3k words is heaps to read lol, i thought it was too much :p
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 16, 2010, 01:32:51 am
Yes. Send now. And 3k words is heaps to read lol, i thought it was too much :p

OK I hope you enjoy it.  ;)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on August 17, 2010, 07:09:06 am
Hey, I've submitted my story too for Week 33. Good luck to all :)

Oh and uh, Georgio's story about England was sure very funny :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 17, 2010, 12:26:15 pm
Got them both, look good so far!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 19, 2010, 01:05:48 am
may I ask, how many entries have you received so far?
it seems that people aren't much interested into this.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Violet on August 21, 2010, 04:53:32 pm
How old is George Ancelotti?  :roll:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 33 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 21, 2010, 04:55:52 pm
August 21st has arrived.

All entries are denied from now on. Hope Giac will review them soon.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 22, 2010, 01:35:44 pm
Week 33 is done, will announce winner tomorrow. Get writing for week 34!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: Sarah_Morelli on August 22, 2010, 10:17:48 pm
Question about this:  Are Collaberated writings accepted?  Like if two members of the community worked on a story together and wrote it?   Just wondering.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 22, 2010, 10:57:32 pm
Sure. Prize will be split half half.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 23, 2010, 01:38:51 am
Love theme? Hmmmm, will try my best.
Good luck to other writers.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on August 23, 2010, 06:24:00 am
Oh...  a narrative about love theme... It's gonna be quite tricky but I may still try nonetheless  :rofl:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 23, 2010, 01:11:24 pm
Congrats to Carlos for winning week 33 - his entry is available for viewing in the main post. Contact me IG for your prize!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on August 23, 2010, 01:40:36 pm
Congrats to Carlos for winning week 33 - his entry is available for viewing in the main post. Contact me IG for your prize!

Wow thanks a lot GiacJr!!!  :hurray: :rofl: :lol: For sure I'll claim my prize and see ya when you're IG  ;) Man I feel so honoured that my story can be displayed  :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 23, 2010, 02:31:32 pm
Congratulations on the win.  ;)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: Dan_Jones on August 23, 2010, 11:40:03 pm
Wow at George Ancelotti's winning entry.. :roll:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on August 24, 2010, 09:35:16 am
Congratulations on the win.  ;)

Thanks Void  :)

Wow at George Ancelotti's winning entry.. :roll:

I know right  :rofl:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 27, 2010, 07:51:13 am
Only a couple more days to send in entries!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: Void on August 27, 2010, 07:12:32 pm
When to submit: Your entry must be in by Saturday the 28th August
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Only a couple more days to send in entries!

 :neutral:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on August 28, 2010, 02:14:41 am
I stop accepting entries late Sunday in Australia due to some time zones still being in Saturday :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on August 28, 2010, 04:54:39 am
I stop accepting entries late Sunday in Australia due to some time zones still being in Saturday :)

Ok, no problem with me. Anyway I submitted my entry just an hour ago  :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on September 01, 2010, 05:49:42 am
Hey when will the results of the Week 34 be shown?  :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on September 01, 2010, 07:43:50 am
Sorry I've been extremely busy. Will get around to it when I can!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on September 01, 2010, 11:16:51 am
Sorry I've been extremely busy. Will get around to it when I can!

Ok, I'll be waiting  :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: ~Legend~ on October 03, 2010, 01:06:30 am
Oh cool.

Giac, do you need someone to run new story themes until you are able to get back to it?
 
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 03, 2010, 05:37:22 am
Nope, I got some time now due to having no internet and I can sort it all out. Sorry for the delays and such. Next time I get internet, I will be updating the topic.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: EliteTerm on October 03, 2010, 06:28:14 am
Looking forward to it as I wanna give this a shot soon.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 03, 2010, 08:58:42 am
Nope, I got some time now due to having no internet and I can sort it all out. Sorry for the delays and such. Next time I get internet, I will be updating the topic.

Great, it'll be back soon!  :hurray:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: ~Legend~ on October 03, 2010, 01:37:07 pm
Ah ok, good to hear.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 04, 2010, 06:05:16 pm
Week 40 is up!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 34 of 2010
Post by: ~Legend~ on October 04, 2010, 06:38:06 pm
Week 40 is up!

Wow, that also means there aren't too many weeks leftover of 2010!  :eek:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 05, 2010, 12:40:59 pm
Alright... It's a poem for Week 40... I'm definitely in for this :D

And congrats to Sarah Patterson for the essay on Love.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: Green_Thumb on October 05, 2010, 01:11:06 pm
Sent my entry for Week 40, good luck all.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 07, 2010, 05:12:59 am
Only got one entry so far, 2 days left!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: LoCoMoToR on October 07, 2010, 05:39:23 am
looks like so much fun. i will try my best.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 07, 2010, 03:13:52 pm
I've submitted my poem too, so now there're at least 2 entries!  :D Good luck to all anyway.  :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: Sarah_Morelli on October 07, 2010, 10:11:07 pm
Lol, writing my poem now.  And Thanks for allowing me to win :)  I feel good :P
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: LoCoMoToR on October 08, 2010, 01:46:54 am
submitted mines last night, haha last thing i did for the night.
GoodLuck to Everyone
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 08, 2010, 05:30:56 pm
One more day left to submit entries!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: ~Legend~ on October 09, 2010, 01:06:44 am
One more day left to submit entries!

Oh, I was just wondering - can we send it in *on* Saturday? I am working on the finishing touches.  ;)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 09, 2010, 03:59:01 am
Yeah sure, I'll close the entires in probably about 12 hours.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 10, 2010, 05:43:27 am
Hey GiacJr, isn't time to post the winner of Week 40 now?  :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 10, 2010, 07:15:10 am
Week 41 is up - congrats to Green_Thumb for winning week 40 with his...strange poem. :trust:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: LoCoMoToR on October 10, 2010, 07:22:28 am
well... what was the poem?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 10, 2010, 07:39:13 am
The link's in the main post.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 10, 2010, 11:19:02 am
Oh congrats to Green Thumb for that!
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: JuanT on October 10, 2010, 01:08:32 pm
I don't know if week 42 is up, but I have the story for it.. Could I send it to you Giac?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: Green_Thumb on October 10, 2010, 01:21:51 pm
Week 41 is up - congrats to Green_Thumb for winning week 40 with his...strange poem. :trust:

Yay, And it's her :X

How can i collect my prize ?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 10, 2010, 01:27:37 pm
Contact me IG when you see me.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 40 of 2010
Post by: Green_Thumb on October 10, 2010, 01:40:57 pm
Contact me IG when you see me.

Okay, Thank you :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: JuanT on October 10, 2010, 03:40:33 pm
Sended a story through your email giacjr. Took me 3 hours to write :drunk:
Oops... Maded a mistake.. Didn't send in .txt..... Doing now! Sorry for first e-mail Giac, delete that one.

EDIT: 15:54

As mentioned, did send in .txt file now Giac. Sorry for the mistake.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: Green_Thumb on October 10, 2010, 06:48:43 pm
I will be also entering week 41.

Going to start tomorrow.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: Julio. on October 10, 2010, 08:56:57 pm
May enter again :P
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: LoCoMoToR on October 11, 2010, 01:06:24 am
i will definetely enter again. in my last one it took me like 15 minutes to get done, i will take longer this time.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 15, 2010, 06:29:04 am
I've submitted mine, good luck to everyone participating!  ;) :D
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 16, 2010, 05:39:30 am
One day left
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: ~Legend~ on October 17, 2010, 03:48:43 am
Congrats to Week 40's winner: Green_Thumb.

Now that I have some free time (hopefully), I will have to give this a shot. :)
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 41 of 2010
Post by: rJCaiG on October 18, 2010, 05:09:12 am
Week 41 is over, week 42 will be up in a moment.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 18, 2010, 06:32:45 am
Ok, week 42 is a narrative of a fantasy but who's the winner for week 41?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: JuanT on October 19, 2010, 11:11:07 am
Quoto out of begin post: and the winner will be announced every Saturday.

To Giacjr,

Giacjr, who's the winner of week 41? We still don't know.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: CoolGuy295 on October 19, 2010, 11:46:42 am
Quoto out of begin post: and the winner will be announced every Saturday.

To Giacjr,

Giacjr, who's the winner of week 41? We still don't know.

Chill and relax, GiacJr told me that he hasn't read through all the stories yet. So we'll just have to wait for him to read through all of them and finally reveal who's the winner.
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: xu1gua on November 03, 2010, 07:28:19 am
It's still going on?
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: hell1989 on January 08, 2011, 09:09:47 pm
I am not too sure but I am going to post what I wrote here,

Hell aka David aka the unnamed conman: The real story of David Gaff

   Bryant "Hell" Lrvington once had a dream of owning it all, and at one point of his life he did achieve this in San Fierro. Not many people know his real name, he states that its because he forgot it many years ago, and referrers to himself as Hell. Being one of the co-founders of Gvardia, Hell once a leader of Las Venturas Astecas went on to betray them and kill their leader Loyd Banks with a M14 on a casino roof, then went on to take over the identity of a dead man, his name David Gaff was the son of the founder of South Side Choppers. For what seems like a couple months Hell did a decent job bringing SSC back from the grave, because John Gaff the founder fell apart and died of heartbreak and not to mention a bullet to the head by some assassin, but the heartbreak of his son dying completely and utterly turn his soul apart, his 15 year old son the real David Gaff.

   At the age of 14, David Edward Gaff had no intention to get into his fathers legacy so he stole his fathers Harley and went riding into the night of Las Venturas, he was native, but had enough smarts to know what he was doing because he had planned this for months. He knew a lot of his fathers contacts and friends, and thought he choose the right one to come to for help and shelter. In the end he choose wrong, and it turned out the man he thought was his friend and his fathers, was just a agent of a rival biker gang.

   Named Sean Hank, was extremely cleaver and did various jobs for various scum.  Hank took Gaff in for a couple months learned information about SSC and then lured Gaff on his 15th birthday David, thinking he would be brought into business with Sean "Devilman" Hank, this time and for the last time was utterly wrong. After telling David to take a ride with him to Fort Carson for a night out at a bar, Hank gave a induction item to him, a 9mm pistol, David Edward Gaff was happy to finally have a piece for himself and to start to get to work. Then he was told he had a job to do on that very same night, to help Hank take care of some corrupt police officer who resided in Fort Carson. They exited the bar and started their choppers up and rode to the officer's home, rather large for a cop who lived by himself, extremely greedy and no good on women.

   David was told he go around the back door while Hank knocked on the front foor drawing attention in his direction, but Hank didn't even knock, he just stepped inside and waited with the police officer, for David to bust in through the back with his 9mm pistol, intent of getting this job done. David spotted the officer in a chair in his living room facing a TV, Gaff could only see the top of his head, aimed in with his pistol and pulled the trigger. Gaff heard a little click, he didnt even check the clip to see if it was loaded, and got very scared. The cop turned his head towards Gaff and just smiled a evil devilish look, one the holy bible might describe as a look satan himself would do. Out of the cornnor of the dark room and out from the darkness stepped Sean Hanks with a silenced 9mm glock, David screamed out all the whys and hows and how could yous he possibly could, before getting shot point blank in his face, eyes rolling slowly into the back of his head, the real son of John Gaff failed in his pursuit of rebellion against his fathers wishes of becoming the leader of South Side Choppers, all he wanted was to find his own way, but his life ended shorty due to the real evil this world can conjure.

   Later on Sean Hank was the one to put a bullet into John Gaffs head as well, when John was invited for a couple bottles of jack at the SSC bar, all members had been told SSC was done forever due to his sons death and that John couldn't trust anyone, not even his Vice president to take over, he wanted his son to continue the legacy he had created, but never got that wish and his life was ended in that bar, perhaps for the best after all.

   Hank was in the end killed randomly by Hell, at a bar a couple years later when Hell took David Gaffs identity, lifes a bad girl and sometimes people who deserve to die will be killed by the gun. When Hell took over SSC, it had to be about 15 years later David Gaff's unfortunate death. After walking away from LVA and killing his former boss, Loyd Banks had screamed after Hell fired the first bullet into his arm "I thought we here brothers! Blood in, blood out!" Hell couldnt hear from on top of the casino on the strip and didn't really give a crap. Hell later had seen a odd gravestone out in the desert while on another assassination mission for the Corleone family, near Fort Carson it had read "David Edward Gaff" 1966-1980, the unfortunate Son - Left behind John Gaff and written with some red spray paint was SSC on the top of the headstone above the name.

   Hell grew interest into seeing this, he died at a early age 14 or 15 and looked into the obituaries from that year at a library and found him and read the story, at the time it was 1990. After completing the mission for the Corleone Family, hell later went to the gravestone and tore it up and out with a shovel, and then dug up the body of David Gaff and looked inside, found a South Side Choppers SSC jacket and patch reading "President" and "David Gaff" above it and it really got Hell obsessed and his mind working. John Gaff at the funeral had thrown his jacket and stiched his sons name to the jacket, a reminder to himself of what could have been.

   On a dark cloudy night, about two weeks after reading about Gaffs death Hell felt obliged to seek out and murder the corrupt police officer, in the story of David Edward Gaff's death it had said he was killed while in-tempting to murder a decorated police officer, but the facts seemed very wrong. It had said, he had attempted to kill the officer, by breaking an entering on his home, but that didn't make sense, why would a 14 year old kid even attempt that? Hell thought. Hell later found the officers name Brian Tenpenny, he must be at least 45 to 50 years old by now, a retired getto gun fighter worked the system to become a cop and did a rather great job at it, but now his time had come, Hell felt an extremely fascinating urge to murder this man, so he seeked out to find him and found he was living in the same house of the murder, still rather large but with some improvements. Hell knocked on the door and waited about 20 seconds for the man to walk to the door and answer, as retired officer Brian Tenpenny opened the door Hell quicky moved to the side of the door ready with his silenced spaz shotgun, stepped out from the shadows and completely slaughtered man, shooting him five times, two in the gut throwing the man 5 feet back, near death and screaming trying to reach for his 9mm on his side, but had no chance at all, not if Hell had anything to do with it, Hell then shot the officers arm off blood splattering all over the walls, then Hell gracefully moved in to shoot the man in his chest, flesh and bone exploding should have been all over, the man about not completely dead yet. Actually not even close, because Brian was paranoid all the time and always wore his bullet proof vest, and only his arm was shot off, screaming in pain Hell then moved in for the kill shot, and blew the corrupt officer Brian Tenpenny's face off exposing some skull, the man was dead and Hell looked ever so insanely at one of the eyes of the officer, before it rolled back into what was left of the corpses head, he saw a flash of red dimmer, Hell had known the devil in this man had been exorcismed.

   David Gaff would have been 25 years old if he had lived to rule over the biker gang, and Hell looked a little bit like him from what he could see, Hell has a babyface with a full beard now. To cover everything up about it, he broke into records at LV department of obituaries  and erased Gaffs death, and didnt really care about what his family or what would be left, or the locals thought about him bringing SSC back to life. He started from the ground up, created a backround story about where he had been, stating to anyone he talked to in town he had been away in Vice City running SSC, and that the F.B.I had come in and shut them down due to a little stinking rat who Hell had killed before departing to San Andreas and Las Venturas.


To be continued
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: [NP]Monte Montague on April 25, 2011, 04:10:20 am
I'm guessing this is now over or something?
  :trust:
Title: Re: Argonath Writing Competition - Week 42 of 2010
Post by: EliteTerm on April 26, 2011, 01:08:21 am
It is. This topic is now locked as GiacJr is currently not active in the community as of today, until he decides to return and continue this.
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