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Argonath RPG Community => Speakerbox => Topic started by: KhornateMonkey on November 17, 2010, 04:51:33 pm

Title: Not My Business
Post by: KhornateMonkey on November 17, 2010, 04:51:33 pm: Not My Business

I'd been tired, under the weather,
but the ansaphone kept screaming:
One more sick note, mister, and your finished. Fired
I thumbed a lift to where the car was park.
A 1992 Elegent. It was hired.

I picked him up in Vinewood.
He was following the sun from west to east,
with just a toothbrush and the good earth for a bed. The truth,
he said, was blowin' in the wind,
or round the next bend

I let him have it,
on the top road out of Richman,
One on the head, then six times with the krooklok in the face,
and didn't even swereve.
I dropped it into third

and leant across.
to let him out. I saw him in the mirror,
bouncing of the kerb, then disappearing down the verge.
We were the same age, if givin a week.
He'd said he liked the breeze

to run his fingers
through his hair. It was twelve noon.
The outlook for the day was fair.
Stitch that, I remember thinking,
you can walk from there.

Just a short story if you would call it that ;)
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Wash on November 18, 2010, 02:14:57 am: Why would you post this shitty poem from the English GCSE syllabus?
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Lorenzo. on November 18, 2010, 05:16:33 pm: Cool story bro :)
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: dtlove on November 19, 2010, 06:57:21 pm: Quote from: Wash on November 18, 2010, 02:14:57 am
Why would you post this shitty poem from the English GCSE syllabus?

Troll Much?

Nice one Monkey
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: KhornateMonkey on November 19, 2010, 07:13:03 pm: Thank you Peeps
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Wash on November 20, 2010, 12:30:40 am: Quote from: KhornateMonkey on November 18, 2010, 04:30:25 pm
I don't think it's shitty, I like it.... And it's not a poem, its a short Novel
It is a poem.

... (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Not_My_Business)
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Cane on November 20, 2010, 12:40:58 am: Quote from: KhornateMonkey on November 18, 2010, 04:30:25 pm
I don't think it's shitty, I like it.... And it's not a poem, its a short Novel

... A 'short novel' (if there is one in existence) would probably be at least 50 pages long... This is a poem.
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Pandalink on November 20, 2010, 03:23:47 am: The f**k?
This isn't even Not My Business, that one is the one with the yam or something.
This is Hitcher.

lrn2englishgcse

Edit:
not even copied correctly from original text :|
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Cane on November 20, 2010, 06:21:46 am: No, we're telling you that it is a poem. It's nothing else, but a poem. andlol@pandascomment
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: KhornateMonkey on November 20, 2010, 05:16:50 pm: Quote from: Pandalink on November 20, 2010, 03:23:47 am
The f**k?
This isn't even Not My Business, that one is the one with the yam or something.
This is Hitcher.

lrn2englishgcse

Edit:
not even copied correctly from original text :|

Yes, I edited it To fit with Argonath

Lock Please
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: Pandalink on November 20, 2010, 06:32:17 pm: Quote from: KhornateMonkey on November 20, 2010, 05:16:50 pm
Yes, I edited it To fit with Argonath
Does the sun set in the east in Argonath? o:
Title: Re: Not My Business
Post by: rJCaiG on November 21, 2010, 06:24:29 am: I love how you guys all trolled this topic and ruined it
oh wait, no I don't. Grow up.