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Title: Carlos Rivera
Post by: Mikhail Zakhaev on September 24, 2012, 05:26:35 pm
- Carlos Rivera -


Age: 54
D.O.D: 28th April 1958.
Place of birth: Mexico.
Current Residence: 58th Street, East Los Santos.
Relatives: Unknown.


Affiliation: Sureno 13, Segundo Jefe.
Occupation: Retired Drug Lord.
Vehicles: Tahoma.
Weapons: Shotgun, 9mm, Uzi/Tec 9, AK-47.


Loves: His gang.
Likes: Making money.
Dislikes: People that show no respect.
Respects: Loyalty.
Hates: Getting shot.
Favorite Drink: Beer.
Favorite Food: Burrito.


Build: Old Man.
Height: 1.74 M
Weight: 75 KG.
Tattoos: On his arms.
Eye Color: Light Blue.
Hair Color: Grey/Black.
Piercings/Physical scars: Big scar on his left leg.

Character Story
Carlos Rivera was born in Mexico City. Not much is known about the time he lived there and he doesn't like to talk about his past. He moved to America in 1980, but he couldn't find a job so he started working for himself. He spent all his money on a small shop in East Los Santos and converted it into a 24/7, but it was not enough. He wanted more. So he started smuggling drugs, using his 24/7 store as a front. Known for his ruthless ways to punish people, he didn't like people standing in his way, so he got rid of them. He soon started to get a bigger share in the drug market so that's when he came in touch with Sureno 13. He found a local buyer named Stefano Ruiz, and they soon started working together. He became Segundo Jefe later that year, but years passed, and Carlos got older. He left the drug operation for Stefano to run, but that doesn't mean he left the Sureno's. He's still in control of the Sureno's if Stefano isn't around and keeps an eye out for everyone who steps in their way...

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Title: Re: Carlos Rivera
Post by: EenBeeFour on September 24, 2012, 05:36:55 pm
Nice work, just need a bit of a touch up on the punctuation and you've got it.

Post Merge: September 24, 2012, 05:42:59 pm
- Carlos Rivera -

Character Story
Carlos Rivera was born in Mexico City. Not much is known about the time he lived there and he doesn't like to talk about his past. He moved to America in 1976, but he couldn't find a job so he started working for himself. He spent all his money on a small shop in East Los Santos and converted it into a 24/7, but it was not enough for the old man. He wanted more. So he started smuggling drugs, using his 24/7 store as a front. Known for his ruthless ways to punish people, he didn't like people standing in his way, so he got rid of them. He soon started to get a bigger share in the drug market so that's when he came in touch with Sureno 13. He found a local buyer named Stefano Ruiz, and they soon started working together. He became Segundo Jefe later that year, but years passed, and Carlos got older. He left the drug operation for Stefano to run, but that doesn't mean he left the Sureno's. He's still in control of the Sureno's if Stefano isn't around and keeps an eye out for everyone who steps in their way.
Title: Re: Carlos Rivera
Post by: clancker on September 24, 2012, 05:49:43 pm
Nice
Title: Re: Carlos Rivera
Post by: Mikhail Zakhaev on September 24, 2012, 06:33:13 pm
Nice work, just need a bit of a touch up on the punctuation and you've got it.

Post Merge: September 24, 2012, 05:42:59 pm
Thanks everyone, and I updated the story. Thanks for taking the time to help! ;)
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