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on: July 10, 2011, 12:19:11 am
Hello,this is my story and you can think of this as a little mini-game,you can write your own ending! Enjoy! PS. Excuse me for any typos/not understandable sentences. Too lazy to edit them


*As you walk, you find a notebook on the ground. You pick it up and closely look at it.

*On the notebook it clearly says 'Raptured Notebook',as you open the notebook you find information about the notebook,there's a picture of a man that's looking old and wet.

*You look at the second page of the notebook. You see a Story with 3 chapters,while each contain 2 pages.

*While you're reading it; you find the story interesting. You turn the page and read Chapter 2.

*As you read the cliffhanger ; in excitement you turn the page and read the final chapter; Chapter 3.

*You walk to your home,leaving the notebook on your table. You think about the story and you don't know what to do with the notebook.

Thank you for reading this;
Post your ending below and leave some feedback, i appreciate it!



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Reply #1 on: July 10, 2011, 12:22:32 am
Ending: You dump the notebook in a trashcan, and go fap on redtube



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Reply #2 on: July 10, 2011, 12:25:13 am
Ending: You dump the notebook in a trashcan, and go fap on redtube

Hehe,
The notebook is forever lost

Or is it?
Someone might find it...



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Reply #3 on: July 10, 2011, 01:03:54 am
GO rapture!

you have writing talent man! and i feel honoured that my gang is in the story too !

sincerly,

Jason

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Reply #4 on: July 10, 2011, 01:04:41 am
Nice story bro! i think it should end like: EAF and 3sS are they almighty gangs DON'T MESS WITH US!!!!!!!  :war:  :sig:

History does write himself,indeed. But sometimes it needs a little help!


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Reply #5 on: July 10, 2011, 01:06:21 am
Nice story bro! i think it should end like: EAF and 3sS are they almighty gangs DON'T MESS WITH US!!!!!!!  :war:  :sig:

Why are the emoticons shooting eacother :P

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Reply #6 on: July 10, 2011, 11:07:49 am
Very nice story. Seems like you have writing talent. Keep on.
 :ps: I'm writing an ending and I will post it when it's finished.



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Reply #7 on: July 10, 2011, 12:44:34 pm
after i left the notebook behind on the table i go to sleep.
after i wake up i found a note near the notebook which says:come to the pole position and bring the book.
so i went out to find the pole position with the notebook in my backpack. After a long time i finally found it and went inside! i never knew the thing what was going to happen would change my life. eventually inside i only see Gangsters wearing a '3sS' logo. one came up to me and told me i had to go to the back, when i got there i saw 2 people, probably the leaders of the '3sS' so they told me to sit down. they told me a story how they ended up in vice city. When their story was finished i asked why i had to bring the notebook, they answered: the notebook belongs to allies of our gang the finest allie we ever had. so if we can trade the notebook for some money so that we can store it. i gave them the notebook and i received a cheque of 20,000 dollars! after that i saw the leaders put the notebook in a glass sculpture in their HQ. and as far as i know i think it is still there and it will be... forever


Sincerly,

Jason

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Reply #8 on: July 10, 2011, 01:00:21 pm



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Reply #9 on: July 10, 2011, 05:22:19 pm
Nice story.
Glad my name's mentioned twice :D



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Reply #10 on: July 10, 2011, 06:05:48 pm
Cool story mate.



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Reply #11 on: July 10, 2011, 06:41:52 pm
Nice story, your story is pretty much like mine.



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Reply #12 on: July 10, 2011, 09:09:02 pm
zerox no creativity? jejej



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Reply #13 on: July 10, 2011, 10:12:15 pm
^ Dude what do you mean?



 


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