Need your feedback

[Huntsman]

Evening,

So basically I've installed Linux Mint today along side my Windows. It comes with a very powerful music composing tool called "Linux Multimedia Studio". Now the thing is, I used to create music by using loop'ed pre-recorded instruments before, which is considered amateur and unprofessional, but today, since i've got my hands on Linux, I've attempted to create something of my own. So there you go, my first attempt. Please let me know what you think in the comments.

https://soundcloud.com/rytuklis/rytuklis-retro-kicktest-version