The Gvardia Family || San Fierro's Main Power || Best criminal group of 09/10/11

[Murdock]

I find it funny that you tried to be funny but failed to be funnty and now you look like a little pissed-over girl who got raped by her father.
Congratz fail troll!

[Daniel.BM]

In-Game Name:Daniel
In-Game Age:32
Age in real life: 12
List previous names you used:Fernando Bellucci and Fernando Sicilians
How long you been playing on Argonath?24 of april of 2010.
Do you have license and passport?Yes
List assets you own(house,car,bizz)Yes i dont have bizz
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?No
How active are you?Now yes
In which time of day, do you play(CET)?CET+1
How much criminal experience do you have?RP and Shoting
Reasons for joining Gvardia? Because is the best mafia in Argonath
Your opinion on your RP knowledge?Good Rp.
What things are you specialized in?Drugs and weapons
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:Bellucci ,Sicilians and Berluccini 
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?:Yes
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?:yes
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?Daniel_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
                                           
00.00 AM 11-12-1995

I cant sleep...I feel alone,affraid of the future,its the first night after the release,suddenly I took my pen and started to get some flashbacks,childhood,school,college,the start of my criminal career and so on...

.::Childhood::.
Born in 1972 in a poor family in Portugal,Lived a normal life as evey kid in my age,altought our financial situation was getting wrost day by day my father tried as hard as he could to keep it good...but what we had no idea about is what he was working,I havent realised it until i was 15 years old when my father got killed by some italian mafia members wich he owned them a huge ammount of money as he couldnt pay it back.I tried to forget the past go on my own life  and stay away from those gangs and mafias,but i couldnt forget the scene when that Mafioso took out his Berreta and shot my dad betwen his eyes.
.::College::.
College was nothing to me but a period when I started to build my personality and learn how to live and survive as it was also a period where I was thinking of the way to revenge for my beloved father,by that time i had a lot of options but i had to make a choise wich it was going and leaded the rest of my life,and before i finish my last year of college i have already took my final decision,Im about to take the revenge.
.::Criminal career::.
Before Even the graduation I gave up the college,and started hanging out with some small armes and drug dealers in my small town trying to get some knowledge about how those criminal organisations work,it wasnt the easy I tought,before I even join them my first task was to burn down the house of an undercover officier who was spying the gang,I have finished to work as they told me but i forgot about one things due to my lack of experiance wich its the evidences this is the weakness point of every criminal group,now after the Boss knew that the police are looking for me i was being the next target and i was being hunted by police and the organisation...i had no place to run to now,im almost out of ideas when they are getting closer to me hour by hour i got a call from an old friend of my father i helped him and he helped me back getting me to San Fierro,SA.
-San Fierro,SA.
SF bayside docks,There where was my first step in San Fierro,away from all my enemies and haters but Im still on the way of revenge wich it wont be over until I die or I kill everyone who was involved in my father's death.It didnt took me long to meet some of my portuguese brothers,each of us was there aiming at his own target,we decided to make an organised Mafia and call it Berluccini,Ricardo,Aurelio,Silvia and a lot more were controlling the Organisation and we did good we bought a small casino wich it was like a Headquarters.As we were new in San Fierro we had to make relations with other groups in order to help us and help them,by other words we were looking for allies...once hanging around in San Fierro i entered a hotel located in Queens owned by Gvardia family,the stongest organisation in the whole San Andreas leaded by Mr Cofiliano And Mr.Eugene,I met the son of Mr Eugene Mr.Vladimir,and he was the first one we Berluccini met in San Fierro since then our relationship with Gvardia was perfect,But beacuse of some probleme Berluccini started to lose it members and the ony who could take careof such Situations was out town Ricardo.After few months I got busted in a drug deal in San Fierro and entred to the Federal jail Mordor for 2 years.

END.

Signed
Daniel.

[Donnie]

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[b][color=#00BFFF]In-Game Name:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]In-Game Age:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Age in real life:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]List previous names you used:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]How long you been playing on Argonath?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Do you have license and passport?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]List assets you own(house,car,bizz)[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]How active are you?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]In which time of day, do you play(CET)?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]How much criminal experience do you have?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Reasons for joining Gvardia?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Your opinion on your RP knowledge?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]What things are you specialized in?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?:[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?[/color][/b]
[b][color=#00BFFF]Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.[/color][/b]
(character story must be 500 words or more)


Use this. Also fix your application.


Also wasn't you in Falcone? Why you left/kicked from there?

[Daniel.BM]

Gvardia Mob Application
In-Game Name: Daniel.
In-Game Age:30
Age in real life: 12
List previous names you used:Daniel Berluccini, Fernando Marques ,Fernando Beluccini and Daniel Falcone
How long you been playing on Argonath? 6 th april 2010
Do you have license and passport?Yes
List assets you own(house,car,bizz)yes i dont have bizz
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?No
How active are you?Yes
In which time of day, do you play(CET)?3+1
How much criminal experience do you have?Yes
Reasons for joining Gvardia?I like the Rp and is the best family in Argonath
Your opinion on your RP knowledge? Good
What things are you specialized in?Drugs and Weapons
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:Marques Bellucci and Berluccini and Falcone
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?: Yes
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?: Yes
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?Daniel_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
(character story must be 500 words or more)
00.00 AM 11-12-1995

I cant sleep...I feel alone,affraid of the future,its the first night after the release,suddenly I took my pen and started to get some flashbacks,childhood,school,college,the start of my criminal career and so on...

.::Childhood::.
Born in 1972 in a poor family in Portugal,Lived a normal life as evey kid in my age,altought our financial situation was getting wrost day by day my father tried as hard as he could to keep it good...but what we had no idea about is what he was working,I havent realised it until i was 15 years old when my father got killed by some italian mafia members wich he owned them a huge ammount of money as he couldnt pay it back.I tried to forget the past go on my own life  and stay away from those gangs and mafias,but i couldnt forget the scene when that Mafioso took out his Berreta and shot my dad betwen his eyes.
.::College::.
College was nothing to me but a period when I started to build my personality and learn how to live and survive as it was also a period where I was thinking of the way to revenge for my beloved father,by that time i had a lot of options but i had to make a choise wich it was going and leaded the rest of my life,and before i finish my last year of college i have already took my final decision,Im about to take the revenge.
.::Criminal career::.
Before Even the graduation I gave up the college,and started hanging out with some small armes and drug dealers in my small town trying to get some knowledge about how those criminal organisations work,it wasnt the easy I tought,before I even join them my first task was to burn down the house of an undercover officier who was spying the gang,I have finished to work as they told me but i forgot about one things due to my lack of experiance wich its the evidences this is the weakness point of every criminal group,now after the Boss knew that the police are looking for me i was being the next target and i was being hunted by police and the organisation...i had no place to run to now,im almost out of ideas when they are getting closer to me hour by hour i got a call from an old friend of my father i helped him and he helped me back getting me to San Fierro,SA.
-San Fierro,SA.
SF bayside docks,There where was my first step in San Fierro,away from all my enemies and haters but Im still on the way of revenge wich it wont be over until I die or I kill everyone who was involved in my father's death.It didnt took me long to meet some of my portuguese brothers,each of us was there aiming at his own target,we decided to make an organised Mafia and call it Berluccini,Ricardo,Aurelio,Silvia and a lot more were controlling the Organisation and we did good we bought a small casino wich it was like a Headquarters.As we were new in San Fierro we had to make relations with other groups in order to help us and help them,by other words we were looking for allies...once hanging around in San Fierro i entered a hotel located in Queens owned by Gvardia family,the stongest organisation in the whole San Andreas leaded by Mr Cofiliano And Mr.Eugene,I met the son of Mr Eugene Mr.Vladimir,and he was the first one we Berluccini met in San Fierro since then our relationship with Gvardia was perfect,But beacuse of some probleme Berluccini started to lose it members and the ony who could take careof such Situations was out town Ricardo.After few months I got busted in a drug deal in San Fierro and entred to the Federal jail Mordor for 2 years.

END.

Signed
Daniel.

[Donnie]

List assets you own(house,car,bizz)yes i dont have bizz

Lol..

Also wasn't you in Falcone? Why you left/kicked from there?

[Daniel.BM]

I left Falcone
Post Merge: April 12, 2011, 10:43:14 pm

Gvardia Mob Application
In-Game Name: Daniel.
In-Game Age:30
Age in real life: 12
List previous names you used:Daniel Berluccini, Fernando Marques ,Fernando Beluccini and Daniel Falcone
How long you been playing on Argonath? 6 th april 2010
Do you have license and passport?Yes
List assets you own(house,car,bizz)yes i dont have bizz
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?No
How active are you?Yes
In which time of day, do you play(CET)?3+1
How much criminal experience do you have?Yes
Reasons for joining Gvardia?I like the Rp and is the best family in Argonath
Your opinion on your RP knowledge? Good
What things are you specialized in?Drugs and Weapons
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:Marques Bellucci and Berluccini and Falcone
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?: Yes
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?: Yes
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?Daniel_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
(character story must be 500 words or more)
00.00 AM 11-12-1995

I cant sleep...I feel alone,affraid of the future,its the first night after the release,suddenly I took my pen and started to get some flashbacks,childhood,school,college,the start of my criminal career and so on...

.::Childhood::.
Born in 1972 in a poor family in Portugal,Lived a normal life as evey kid in my age,altought our financial situation was getting wrost day by day my father tried as hard as he could to keep it good...but what we had no idea about is what he was working,I havent realised it until i was 15 years old when my father got killed by some italian mafia members wich he owned them a huge ammount of money as he couldnt pay it back.I tried to forget the past go on my own life  and stay away from those gangs and mafias,but i couldnt forget the scene when that Mafioso took out his Berreta and shot my dad betwen his eyes.
.::College::.
College was nothing to me but a period when I started to build my personality and learn how to live and survive as it was also a period where I was thinking of the way to revenge for my beloved father,by that time i had a lot of options but i had to make a choise wich it was going and leaded the rest of my life,and before i finish my last year of college i have already took my final decision,Im about to take the revenge.
.::Criminal career::.
Before Even the graduation I gave up the college,and started hanging out with some small armes and drug dealers in my small town trying to get some knowledge about how those criminal organisations work,it wasnt the easy I tought,before I even join them my first task was to burn down the house of an undercover officier who was spying the gang,I have finished to work as they told me but i forgot about one things due to my lack of experiance wich its the evidences this is the weakness point of every criminal group,now after the Boss knew that the police are looking for me i was being the next target and i was being hunted by police and the organisation...i had no place to run to now,im almost out of ideas when they are getting closer to me hour by hour i got a call from an old friend of my father i helped him and he helped me back getting me to San Fierro,SA.
-San Fierro,SA.
SF bayside docks,There where was my first step in San Fierro,away from all my enemies and haters but Im still on the way of revenge wich it wont be over until I die or I kill everyone who was involved in my father's death.It didnt took me long to meet some of my portuguese brothers,each of us was there aiming at his own target,we decided to make an organised Mafia and call it Berluccini,Ricardo,Aurelio,Silvia and a lot more were controlling the Organisation and we did good we bought a small casino wich it was like a Headquarters.As we were new in San Fierro we had to make relations with other groups in order to help us and help them,by other words we were looking for allies...once hanging around in San Fierro i entered a hotel located in Queens owned by Gvardia family,the stongest organisation in the whole San Andreas leaded by Mr Cofiliano And Mr.Eugene,I met the son of Mr Eugene Mr.Vladimir,and he was the first one we Berluccini met in San Fierro since then our relationship with Gvardia was perfect,But beacuse of some probleme Berluccini started to lose it members and the ony who could take careof such Situations was out town Ricardo.After few months I got busted in a drug deal in San Fierro and entred to the Federal jail Mordor for 2 years.

END.

Signed
Daniel.

[Antonio.]

YOU DON'T HAVE TO KEEP FUCKING POSTING YOUR APPLICATION AFTER EVERY OTHER POST!

[Carnage264]

sorry for not being online after 6 oclock tonight guys my sister broke the internet and ive been running around town picking up modems and Ethernet cables but its all fixed now

[RafaDK]

yes. since the reference was to the group called "girl power, [GP]

Girls Pwn*

Lol..

I know... That's the 1337 win, I should put that as signature.

YOU DON'T HAVE TO KEEP f**kING POSTING YOUR APPLICATION AFTER EVERY OTHER POST!

It's just to make sure any1 will see it...

Gvardia Mob Application
In-Game Name: Daniel.
In-Game Age:30
Age in real life: 12
List previous names you used:Daniel Berluccini, Fernando Marques ,Fernando Beluccini and Daniel Falcone
How long you been playing on Argonath? 6 th april 2010
Do you have license and passport?Yes
List assets you own(house,car,bizz)yes i dont have bizz
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?No
How active are you?Yes
In which time of day, do you play(CET)?3+1
How much criminal experience do you have?Yes
Reasons for joining Gvardia?I like the Rp and is the best family in Argonath
Your opinion on your RP knowledge? Good
What things are you specialized in?Drugs and Weapons
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:Marques Bellucci and Berluccini and Falcone
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?: Yes
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?: Yes
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?Daniel_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
(character story must be 500 words or more)
00.00 AM 11-12-1995

I cant sleep...I feel alone,affraid of the future,its the first night after the release,suddenly I took my pen and started to get some flashbacks,childhood,school,college,the start of my criminal career and so on...

.::Childhood::.
Born in 1972 in a poor family in Portugal,Lived a normal life as evey kid in my age,altought our financial situation was getting wrost day by day my father tried as hard as he could to keep it good...but what we had no idea about is what he was working,I havent realised it until i was 15 years old when my father got killed by some italian mafia members wich he owned them a huge ammount of money as he couldnt pay it back.I tried to forget the past go on my own life  and stay away from those gangs and mafias,but i couldnt forget the scene when that Mafioso took out his Berreta and shot my dad betwen his eyes.
.::College::.
College was nothing to me but a period when I started to build my personality and learn how to live and survive as it was also a period where I was thinking of the way to revenge for my beloved father,by that time i had a lot of options but i had to make a choise wich it was going and leaded the rest of my life,and before i finish my last year of college i have already took my final decision,Im about to take the revenge.
.::Criminal career::.
Before Even the graduation I gave up the college,and started hanging out with some small armes and drug dealers in my small town trying to get some knowledge about how those criminal organisations work,it wasnt the easy I tought,before I even join them my first task was to burn down the house of an undercover officier who was spying the gang,I have finished to work as they told me but i forgot about one things due to my lack of experiance wich its the evidences this is the weakness point of every criminal group,now after the Boss knew that the police are looking for me i was being the next target and i was being hunted by police and the organisation...i had no place to run to now,im almost out of ideas when they are getting closer to me hour by hour i got a call from an old friend of my father i helped him and he helped me back getting me to San Fierro,SA.
-San Fierro,SA.
SF bayside docks,There where was my first step in San Fierro,away from all my enemies and haters but Im still on the way of revenge wich it wont be over until I die or I kill everyone who was involved in my father's death.It didnt took me long to meet some of my portuguese brothers,each of us was there aiming at his own target,we decided to make an organised Mafia and call it Berluccini,Ricardo,Aurelio,Silvia and a lot more were controlling the Organisation and we did good we bought a small casino wich it was like a Headquarters.As we were new in San Fierro we had to make relations with other groups in order to help us and help them,by other words we were looking for allies...once hanging around in San Fierro i entered a hotel located in Queens owned by Gvardia family,the stongest organisation in the whole San Andreas leaded by Mr Cofiliano And Mr.Eugene,I met the son of Mr Eugene Mr.Vladimir,and he was the first one we Berluccini met in San Fierro since then our relationship with Gvardia was perfect,But beacuse of some probleme Berluccini started to lose it members and the ony who could take careof such Situations was out town Ricardo.After few months I got busted in a drug deal in San Fierro and entred to the Federal jail Mordor for 2 years.

END.

Signed
Daniel.

Doing it for Daniel.


Anyways, how's it going now that Rolereversal is finished?

[Leon.]

Gvardia Mob Application
In-Game Name: Daniel.
In-Game Age:30
Age in real life: 12
List previous names you used:Daniel Berluccini, Fernando Marques ,Fernando Beluccini and Daniel Falcone
How long you been playing on Argonath? 6 th april 2010
Do you have license and passport?Yes
List assets you own(house,car,bizz)yes i dont have bizz
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who?No
How active are you?Yes
In which time of day, do you play(CET)?3+1
How much criminal experience do you have?Yes
Reasons for joining Gvardia?I like the Rp and is the best family in Argonath
Your opinion on your RP knowledge? Good
What things are you specialized in?Drugs and Weapons
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in:Marques Bellucci and Berluccini and Falcone
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?: Yes
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?: Yes
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag?Daniel_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
(character story must be 500 words or more)
00.00 AM 11-12-1995

I cant sleep...I feel alone,affraid of the future,its the first night after the release,suddenly I took my pen and started to get some flashbacks,childhood,school,college,the start of my criminal career and so on...

.::Childhood::.
Born in 1972 in a poor family in Portugal,Lived a normal life as evey kid in my age,altought our financial situation was getting wrost day by day my father tried as hard as he could to keep it good...but what we had no idea about is what he was working,I havent realised it until i was 15 years old when my father got killed by some italian mafia members wich he owned them a huge ammount of money as he couldnt pay it back.I tried to forget the past go on my own life  and stay away from those gangs and mafias,but i couldnt forget the scene when that Mafioso took out his Berreta and shot my dad betwen his eyes.
.::College::.
College was nothing to me but a period when I started to build my personality and learn how to live and survive as it was also a period where I was thinking of the way to revenge for my beloved father,by that time i had a lot of options but i had to make a choise wich it was going and leaded the rest of my life,and before i finish my last year of college i have already took my final decision,Im about to take the revenge.
.::Criminal career::.
Before Even the graduation I gave up the college,and started hanging out with some small armes and drug dealers in my small town trying to get some knowledge about how those criminal organisations work,it wasnt the easy I tought,before I even join them my first task was to burn down the house of an undercover officier who was spying the gang,I have finished to work as they told me but i forgot about one things due to my lack of experiance wich its the evidences this is the weakness point of every criminal group,now after the Boss knew that the police are looking for me i was being the next target and i was being hunted by police and the organisation...i had no place to run to now,im almost out of ideas when they are getting closer to me hour by hour i got a call from an old friend of my father i helped him and he helped me back getting me to San Fierro,SA.
-San Fierro,SA.
SF bayside docks,There where was my first step in San Fierro,away from all my enemies and haters but Im still on the way of revenge wich it wont be over until I die or I kill everyone who was involved in my father's death.It didnt took me long to meet some of my portuguese brothers,each of us was there aiming at his own target,we decided to make an organised Mafia and call it Berluccini,Ricardo,Aurelio,Silvia and a lot more were controlling the Organisation and we did good we bought a small casino wich it was like a Headquarters.As we were new in San Fierro we had to make relations with other groups in order to help us and help them,by other words we were looking for allies...once hanging around in San Fierro i entered a hotel located in Queens owned by Gvardia family,the stongest organisation in the whole San Andreas leaded by Mr Cofiliano And Mr.Eugene,I met the son of Mr Eugene Mr.Vladimir,and he was the first one we Berluccini met in San Fierro since then our relationship with Gvardia was perfect,But beacuse of some probleme Berluccini started to lose it members and the ony who could take careof such Situations was out town Ricardo.After few months I got busted in a drug deal in San Fierro and entred to the Federal jail Mordor for 2 years.

END.

Signed
Daniel.

i lied.

[Eugene]

sup guys, greetings from Russia Btw any1 seen google today?:roll: Yuri Gagarin ftw

yep, 50th anniversary of Yuri Gagarin in space!

[Christiano]

Gvardia Mob Application
In-Game Name: Christiano
In-Game Age: 25
Age in real life: 16
List previous names you used: Christiano_Garcia
How long you been playing on Argonath? 22th January
Do you have license and passport? Yes, both of them.
List assets you own(house,car,bizz) House, bullet, and 200k cash
Were you invited to join Gvardia, by who? Stefano_Gvardia ; Petar_Gvardia
How active are you? A lot, 3-5 hours perday.
In which time of day, do you play(CET)? GMT+1
How much criminal experience do you have? Not a lot.. to be honest.
Reasons for joining Gvardia? Because there are a lot of my friends, Stefano,Danny, Nikos,Donnie, Benny,Petar,Buzz.
Your opinion on your RP knowledge? 7/10
What things are you specialized in? Driving, drug deals.
List previous mafias/gangs/clans you've been in: /
Have you read ALL Gvardia Mob rules?: Yes of course.
Do you understand our rules of roleplay, dividing OOC/IC, brackets, spelling in IC chat, etc?:    Yes.
If accepted, what will your name be with _GvardiaT tag? Christiano_GvardiaT
Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.

It was a usual Saturday, sitting at home listening to some music on some headsets. My mom would usually be there, cooking, Cleaning, and watching us. I woke up at 8:34 In the morning, Tired sleepy. I want to talk to my mother but she wasn't here. I call the cops and i told them my mom was missing. They said they will try their best to find her, So Next Sunday, I wake up, I call the cops again. I ask them if they found my mother, They said no. Then i took my brothers to a restaurant to eat. On the way to the Restaurant, A gang kidnapped me and my 2 little brothers. I told them where are you taking me, they told me to be quiet, or i wont live. So then In 1982 I was born in Rodeo, Los Santos. In 1987 i was in my house with my parents while there was a terrible storm, gangs fighting, and guns shooting. During the night someone stormed in my house while my dad was sleeping on the couch and shot my dad dead and ran off. Ever since that day my mom has been working very had for us not to be homeless. Well I was growing up and I was going to school and my mom was doing good with her job making a decent living. During School I met a friend named Arijanit but everyone called him Ari. Ari and I were very cool and we had each others backs. Well one day after school I was going home when I saw police and ambulance in front of my house, I had no idea what was going on. When i was going towards my house I saw my mom in a body bag, DEAD. My mom died and I had no family left except Ari. I was really frustrated and was really missing my mom, so Ari and I wanted to find out who murdered my mom and kill them. Ari and I decided we need to form some kind of gang and well we did. We made a name called Lombardi for our new gang. We were recruiting people into the gang to make our gang more strong. One day me and Ari were hanging around a place called Grove Street which was ran  by a man named Lance who people called Ryder. Ryder and I became cool so we decided that our two gangs would form an alliance and be very close together. Since than with the help of Ari and Grove street I've been getting closer to finding the murderer of my mother. So the gang lets me go in 3 weeks. I came out bloody,tired,hungry. Then the cops called me, Saying We've found your mother But she's dead. We need to take her body in Evidence on which gang killed her. 2 weeks later, cops come to my house.. I went out and bought some tec9's and mic's. i told my brother take these tec9's and use them when in trouble. I kept my mic in the house. Then we got along, Brothers grew up, Feeling better, and Continuing the life as nothing happened.

[Murdock]

Add some more words to the story there.

[Christiano]

Add some more words to the story there.

It already has a 538 words.

[RafaDK]

Checked it, it has 534 words, more than 500 as requested, good luck with it Christiano.