o.O It doesnt even tell you how to apply, It just give you history of a biker gang..
History lesson? :conf:
I think you need to take abit more time before you post it..
Just add how to apply, And give more history on what happened to the SOSMC And less history on when it was found 
Otherwise, Its ok..,
Goodluck! :razz:
Can't you just write normal?...
Anyway, great "story"! Seems to be more information than story, but still great.
Next parts will come later on, right?