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Have u wrote ure own Texts?

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on: July 21, 2009, 11:23:01 pm
Maybe u wrote ure own song =) then u can post here.. =)
I wrote this song for a friend of mine who died The song calles: Dear god

Strophe: 1
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It was a quite evening
When i saw this message.
Shes dead please dont write no more
I couldnt belive it
But in this this moment
i realize
That she
would never come back

Chorus:
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Dear god,
Why do u take this girl
out of my life..
With who i can talk now
about my problems
She was so young and so Pretty
Dear god,
Why did u took my angel.?

Strophe: 2
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I was crying all night
And i was thinkin about u
I wish i could say goodbye
and talk to u the last time
And i thought
maybe we
see us
in the heaven again

chorus...

Bridge:
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ohhh

I think of u
Every minute and second
I miss u
my heartgirl
but i have to say

The end tones:
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Dear god,
Why do u take this girl
out of my life
With who i can talk now
about my problems
she was so young and so pretty
Dear god,
why did u took my angel?

Rest in peace Keezy


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Reply #1 on: July 21, 2009, 11:24:44 pm
<3.

Lovely ;)



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Reply #2 on: July 21, 2009, 11:27:15 pm
Could be an awesome Metalcore song  ;)


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Reply #3 on: July 21, 2009, 11:27:48 pm
thanks  :redface:
Metalcore? Omg :D its a ballad


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Reply #4 on: July 21, 2009, 11:29:48 pm
could be better with screamos and emo singer xD


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Reply #5 on: July 21, 2009, 11:31:00 pm
I have written a poem, has quite alot of symbolism behind it. Ill let you work it out.

Carpe Diem

From the crack of dawn, to the close of day.
Do what you wish. Do what you may.
That bright glow from the heavens today,
May pass away, any day.

“Carpe Diem”, I heard him say,
Was to “Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow”.

Do what you can. Do what you want.
Do whatever, while you may.
Time is still a-ticking.
But do not believe these words I say,
as time could run out anyway.

“Seize the Day”, I hear him say,
“Life will not always be this way”.

- Adam Warne, 2009

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Reply #6 on: July 21, 2009, 11:31:52 pm
Reminded me "Seize the Day" from Avenged Sevenfold

Nice poem Miami


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Reply #7 on: July 21, 2009, 11:32:35 pm
Very nice Poem Miami =)


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Reply #8 on: July 21, 2009, 11:40:28 pm
Far and near
When time was distant
We hoped to be close
But as time got closer
The distance got more
If only there was no time
There would be no distance between us

One month
Time races by slowly
It seems like yesterday I was with you
Until we meet again seems like forever

Different thoughts remain the same
Nothing is really changed
A new life started since I met you

The present shows the past
My plans have not changed
But the future changed forever


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Reply #9 on: July 21, 2009, 11:42:13 pm
Quote from: Sauron on July 21, 2009, 11:40:28 pm
Far and near
When time was distant
We hoped to be close
But as time got closer
The distance got more
If only there was no time
There would be no distance between us

One month
Time races by slowly
It seems like yesterday I was with you
Until we meet again seems like forever

Different thoughts remain the same
Nothing is really changed
A new life started since I met you

The present shows the past
My plans have not changed
But the future changed forever

Sa...Sau... SAURON?!  :wow:

Holy moly  :bow:

Both those poems/lyrics are brilliant, I really like them, especially 'One Month'  :D


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Reply #10 on: July 21, 2009, 11:43:58 pm
To answer your question. Then yes I have written some texts. Mostly short stories that are incomplete but writing is a way for clearing my thoughts.

Quote from: Gandalf on August 29, 2012, 07:01:29 pm
And we do not try to be real life, as why would you ever play real life if you have one ? We play the GTA universe, and our players should try to live in the GTA world, not the real one.


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Reply #11 on: July 21, 2009, 11:44:56 pm
post it =)


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Reply #12 on: July 21, 2009, 11:49:12 pm
Quote from: BeLLa on July 21, 2009, 11:44:56 pm
post it =)
These texts are all in Estonian.

Quote from: Gandalf on August 29, 2012, 07:01:29 pm
And we do not try to be real life, as why would you ever play real life if you have one ? We play the GTA universe, and our players should try to live in the GTA world, not the real one.


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Reply #13 on: July 21, 2009, 11:52:14 pm
oohh xD


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Reply #14 on: July 21, 2009, 11:55:55 pm
It's 8am and I'm about to go to a funeral. When i get home I'll put up a couple of mine. :D


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