The Greasers - Retro vehicular club || 2013 || Open again! || Recruiting

[Gird3r]

It was a day in Liberty city like any other, the birds were singing, the gangsters downstairs were smoking dope.
I was in my apartment, in my old dusty apartment, lying on my bed whistling my song. Suddenly somebody knocked on the door, I stood up, walking towards it.
The sound got louder and louder as I approached the door, not knowing what will be behind it, not knowing that today my world will change forever.

I opened the door, it was a man in a blue suit, it did not fit him , it was a bit big, he was not the tallest man I've seen, he was about 5'8,
he greeted me with excitement "Hello sir, today I am here to change your life" he spoke very fast, as I was tired I did not quite understand him,
he spoke oh how he will bring me into the big city, where stars live, and there is peace.

I did believe him , as I am a fool of some sort. He pointed to the door, he said that first we will get ourselves some nice clothes.
He took me to his car, I will never forget the smell of it, it was a orange rolls royce, when you went in it smelled like a spring morning.
We drove off to the closest store, he got me a black jacket and some jeans to try on. They both fit me perfectly,
so he gave me some money and told me that we are getting me a car, my own vehicle?

I'm only 21, I never had enough money for a car. So we drove up to a car dealership, he and the dealer spoke for minutes,
which in my brain felt like hours, as 30 minutes ago I was lying on my bed, worrying about nothing but when to wake up.
The car dealer came to me and told me "sir, we have just the thing for you" he pointed to a old vehicle, a small compact one,
made in the 70s, it was a Windsor, red colored. The man in the suit told me that we are taking it for a spin.

So we did, we drove to the hills, I was afraid I would crash into someone, or worse.. something and die, as it was my first time driving on the road,
I felt so free, so young, so.. I felt like a bird spreading his birds, flying into the sunset. We stopped, he turned his head to me and said calmly
"You may be wondering why you are here, well don't worry, I will free you, we will make it and we will go to the big city, I promise you that".

So he let me go, I drove to my house and I slept, I slept for what it felt like over a week.
I heard loud knocking on my door, but not the same kind, someone was bashing on the door, I started walking to it shouting "I'm coming",
when suddenly they breached in, a group of 8 SWAT members in full armor, they started shooting, I ran, I ran like I never ran before,
I ran straight through the 2.nd story window. I landed on a hard piece of metal, I looked down and it was my Windsor,
I span the engine and drove. While driving I got a call, it was from the man himself, but this time he introduced himself, "Hello, this is Bill Jones speaking"
I replied "hey dude I was w.." "No time to talk, pick me up at the hill I left you" so I drove up there, I saw the man ,
but I also saw police helicopters all around the place, he explained to me that the entirety of the city is going to be nuked,
and the president said to keep this town under lock up.

So we drove, he told me to drive to the airport, we drove as fast as we could, a local patrol officer started following us,
when suddenly Bill pulled out a weapon, reloading it. "Dude, what the f**k is that" "It's time for freedom my dear boy"

He started shooting, which drew attention to the local department, soon we had 8 vehicles following us. "okay there is a old friend of mine waiting for us,
I will call him and tell him to fire the engine" "What! engine of what, what is going on" "You will see, just drive" We broke through the airport fence, it was now or never,
 I saw a andromada on my left, this was it, it had it's back open , Bill told me to drive in it, I drove as fast as I could , when I heard "GLACK".

"Billy! Billy! are you alright! Come on dude! Speak" There was no response, billy died, he died in my car, he died to save me, I drove, crashing into the andromada,
the gates closed and we were in the air. I went out of the car, went upstairs to the captain, I introduced myself "Hello, this is Leon, Billy's friend"

"Oh hey, this is Jack, nice to see a friendly face around here, so what happened to Billy?" "Billy got shot man, by the chopper, it's just me and you" "Oh f**k,
not billy, well we have orders, Leon, we will get to LS and we will do what we have to, alright? Can you stick to the plan?" "Of course my friend".

So we flew to LS, we landed, the local PD was there to greet us, they did not take us away, they let us go freely.
So we unloaded all our stuff into Jack's Buffalo and my Windsor, we drove around, it was beautiful, like a new life is about to begin, you may ask yourselves,
what happened to billy? Well the local EMS took him, but more on that later. We looked throughout LS but it was not what we wanted, so we decided to visit the county.

We soon found the perfect place, it was away from the public, this is where we begin our new life. Jack had a lot of money stored from
his home for the "trip" he had 800k so he bought a garage and a small house, as he is a mechanic, and I , well I had nothing, so I went looking for people and found a man,
a dying man, his name I will not reveal but we had a connection on first sight as I saw him shooting an AK 47 in the air, he told me to drive my Windsor to East LS,

I did do that, we drove to east LS when suddenly he lifted up on the roof and started shooting mexicans shouting "Damn you illegal bastards" one of them shot him,
I pulled the old man back into the car, his last words were "the money is hidden in.."

Luckily he had the money on his bank account, as I took 2mil$ of an old man's body I felt good, I came back to Montgomery I bought a house and a bar that
I now run with my friend Jack. So now where do the Greasers come in, well you see, we will keep the Liberty City tradition going, old cars, old rock and old weapons.

Liberty City is back!



EDIT: Took me about 20 minutes for anybody wondering oh and I'll help you with the topic leon

And it took me 8 minutes to fix your broken wall of text, so my eyes do not burn while I read this.
I'll edit this message with my opinion later.

EDIT: My opinion is that this story is to random to properly judge and give feedback on. There's several holes in the story and it feels like a garbled mess. Several things are extremely unrealistic. Like how the hell can the guy in the story teleport to his home and sleep on his bed, while his "friend" and the car dealer discuss shit, the car dealer teleports to his home, wakes him up. And they both somehow instantly teleport to the car dealer.

It makes literally no sense at all.

[Afyea]

Save elite driver rank for me! Plus i bought 2 retro cars.. Good luck

[Gmail]

Save elite driver rank for me! Plus i bought 2 retro cars.. Good luck

[NOTE: This WILL NOT be as in other clubs - "if you join first, you get a highest rank" - NO . Everybody will be forced to go trough the all stages, one by one.

[Gmail]

»The Greasers« Is an automobile Club, based on old-timer cars.

Our Story:

It was a day in Liberty city like any other, the birds were singing, the gangsters downstairs were smoking dope.
I was in my apartment, in my old dusty apartment, lying on my bed whistling my song. Suddenly somebody knocked on the door, I stood up, walking towards it.
The sound got louder and louder as I approached the door, not knowing what will be behind it, not knowing that today my world will change forever.

I opened the door, it was a man in a blue suit, it did not fit him , it was a bit big, he was not the tallest man I've seen, he was about 5'8,
he greeted me with excitement "Hello sir, today I am here to change your life" he spoke very fast, as I was tired I did not quite understand him,
he spoke oh how he will bring me into the big city, where stars live, and there is peace.

I did believe him , as I am a fool of some sort. He pointed to the door, he said that first we will get ourselves some nice clothes.
He took me to his car, I will never forget the smell of it, it was a orange rolls royce, when you went in it smelled like a spring morning.
We drove off to the closest store, he got me a black jacket and some jeans to try on. They both fit me perfectly,
so he gave me some money and told me that we are getting me a car, my own vehicle?

I'm only 21, I never had enough money for a car. So we drove up to a car dealership, he and the dealer spoke for minutes,
which in my brain felt like hours, as 30 minutes ago I was lying on my bed, worrying about nothing but when to wake up.
The car dealer came to me and told me "sir, we have just the thing for you" he pointed to a old vehicle, a small compact one,
made in the 70s, it was a Windsor, red colored. The man in the suit told me that we are taking it for a spin.

So we did, we drove to the hills, I was afraid I would crash into someone, or worse.. something and die, as it was my first time driving on the road,
I felt so free, so young, so.. I felt like a bird spreading his birds, flying into the sunset. We stopped, he turned his head to me and said calmly
"You may be wondering why you are here, well don't worry, I will free you, we will make it and we will go to the big city, I promise you that".

So he let me go, I drove to my house and I slept, I slept for what it felt like over a week.
I heard loud knocking on my door, but not the same kind, someone was bashing on the door, I started walking to it shouting "I'm coming",
when suddenly they breached in, a group of 8 SWAT members in full armor, they started shooting, I ran, I ran like I never ran before,
I ran straight through the 2.nd story window. I landed on a hard piece of metal, I looked down and it was my Windsor,
I span the engine and drove. While driving I got a call, it was from the man himself, but this time he introduced himself, "Hello, this is Bill Jones speaking"
I replied "hey dude I was w.." "No time to talk, pick me up at the hill I left you" so I drove up there, I saw the man ,
but I also saw police helicopters all around the place, he explained to me that the entirety of the city is going to be nuked,
and the president said to keep this town under lock up.

So we drove, he told me to drive to the airport, we drove as fast as we could, a local patrol officer started following us,
when suddenly Bill pulled out a weapon, reloading it. "Dude, what the f**k is that" "It's time for freedom my dear boy"

He started shooting, which drew attention to the local department, soon we had 8 vehicles following us. "okay there is a old friend of mine waiting for us,
I will call him and tell him to fire the engine" "What! engine of what, what is going on" "You will see, just drive" We broke through the airport fence, it was now or never,
 I saw a andromada on my left, this was it, it had it's back open , Bill told me to drive in it, I drove as fast as I could , when I heard "GLACK".

"Billy! Billy! are you alright! Come on dude! Speak" There was no response, billy died, he died in my car, he died to save me, I drove, crashing into the andromada,
the gates closed and we were in the air. I went out of the car, went upstairs to the captain, I introduced myself "Hello, this is Leon, Billy's friend"

"Oh hey, this is Jack, nice to see a friendly face around here, so what happened to Billy?" "Billy got shot man, by the chopper, it's just me and you" "Oh f**k,
not billy, well we have orders, Leon, we will get to LS and we will do what we have to, alright? Can you stick to the plan?" "Of course my friend".

So we flew to LS, we landed, the local PD was there to greet us, they did not take us away, they let us go freely.
So we unloaded all our stuff into Jack's Buffalo and my Windsor, we drove around, it was beautiful, like a new life is about to begin, you may ask yourselves,
what happened to billy? Well the local EMS took him, but more on that later. We looked throughout LS but it was not what we wanted, so we decided to visit the county.

We soon found the perfect place, it was away from the public, this is where we begin our new life. Jack had a lot of money stored from
his home for the "trip" he had 800k so he bought a garage and a small house, as he is a mechanic, and I , well I had nothing, so I went looking for people and found a man,
a dying man, his name I will not reveal but we had a connection on first sight as I saw him shooting an AK 47 in the air, he told me to drive my Windsor to East LS,

I did do that, we drove to east LS when suddenly he lifted up on the roof and started shooting mexicans shouting "Damn you illegal bastards" one of them shot him,
I pulled the old man back into the car, his last words were "the money is hidden in.."

Luckily he had the money on his bank account, as I took 2mil$ of an old man's body I felt good, I came back to Montgomery I bought a house and a bar that
I now run with my friend Jack. So now where do the Greasers come in, well you see, we will keep the Liberty City tradition going, old cars, old rock and old weapons.

Liberty City is back!

Member List

President: [GuN]
Vice President: JackThePenguin
Elite Driver:
Soldier:
Bandana:
Bug:

»The Greasers« Believe in pure RP, so if you want to join us you will need to RP with us, anybody can become a »bug« but only YOU can become one of us.

The member list explained:

BUG – Not a true member, they are just people who like to hang with us.

Bandana – You have proven yourself, you received your bandana, you are an official member, you are here to protect our club and to do the job we want you to.

Soldier – Soldiers are just like Bandanas, only that they are heavily armed, they are not bartenders,  we know they can use their own brain.

Elite Driver – Elite driver is the administration of all lower ranks, so show them some respect, they paid in tears in blood to get here.

Vice President – Vice president is President's right hand, he gives orders when the president is out of town.

President – Highest rank in the club.

Rules

We drive old cars, we don't drive fancy, fast new cars, we believe in retro cars.

Remember! No Combat shotgun allowed! This is the worst thing you can do!

Follow all Argonath RPG rules

You need to work hard to become a Greaser but you can lose it quickly, follow all the rules or you will be gone.



Our CB is /joinchannel RPG

I'm balls deep in this now, there is no way out.

[Afyea]

[NOTE: This WILL NOT be as in other clubs - "if you join first, you get a highest rank" - NO . Everybody will be forced to go trough the all stages, one by one.

Bro.... [GuN] Is my personal friend... Let him handle it...

[LeHott]

Bro.... [GuN] Is my personal friend... Let him handle it...

Yes Jack! How dare you?? It is my job to tell him this:
[THE GREASERS WILL NOT HAVE THAT RULE - WHO JOINS FIRST, GETS THE BIGGER RANK

[Afyea]

Yes Jack! How dare you?? It is my job to tell him this:
[THE GREASERS WILL NOT HAVE THAT RULE - WHO JOINS FIRST, GETS THE BIGGER RANK

C'mon bro...

[Gmail]

Welcome iDanielTheCow as a bandana.

Today a old friend of mine came to visit us, he had some car trouble, but no problem for me, me and Gun fixed it easily.

[Pagon]

>Bullets , infernuses , Buffalos , etc.
Check
>Ones that use Combat shotguns
Check
>Fancy suit
Check

[Pagon]

Double post.

[Afyea]

A little day at the Bar.

First client.




Second client.



And interesting thing.. Happy Corleone came and aimed at me.. Just because I asked for one more dollar..

Good thing i aimed a pic quick... Police will get them now.

P.S - Thanks for my bandana

[newguy]

It would appear that people aren't too interested in giving you some flack.


Making a group is cool. I ain't got a problem with that.
The problem, however, is that you make groups left and right, eventually having to close them.
You should stick to one thing and maintain it, and if keeping your group alive doesn't work, maybe you should consider not making any more groups.


Not gonna take you serious if you keep spewing out group after group. Instant success does not exsist.

[Gmail]

It would appear that people aren't too interested in giving you some flack.


Making a group is cool. I ain't got a problem with that.
The problem, however, is that you make groups left and right, eventually having to close them.
You should stick to one thing and maintain it, and if keeping your group alive doesn't work, maybe you should consider not making any more groups.


Not gonna take you serious if you keep spewing out group after group. Instant success does not exsist.

I'm here to hold him in place, even if he quits, I actually like this idea, and I won't let him be stupid about this, it can bring great RP, and it alredy did.

[LeHott]

Final edit has been done <3

From now on, I will only upload the topic for memberlist things

Daniel - [PENDING] sign is here to remember you of the rule

' you may be fired in any moment, without warnings '

[Afyea]

' you may be fired in any moment, without warnings '

Dammn