Planning about Getting a camera?
Video isnt that much smooth, For future get a Professional Camera and a tripod
And he could put the gun on his head and make him take the pills not hitting him and no blood or anything , And allso
It would be better that dude that killed him didnt need that dude to clean the gun and this to take the gun out.. Just gun out of his pants and boom like every mafia movie

p.s. Really cool Like it so far, Keep Working on it!
Placing the gun and picking it up aint cool okay!, And Reloading it while entering also no need mafia is allways ready and got the bullet in the barrel!
No need for girl just to give a lighter , First kick then give him the pills after he got the pills he lights a cigarrete and laughs and he wakes up in the wild...etc