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on: May 10, 2008, 10:54:53 am
Well, as we all like to role play, and when you RP, you have to have some story, or something to play off of.
Such as - in VC Single Player, I would go get the cop uniform, and pull over all the box trucks, and pretend that the docks were running some drug trades, and using fish vans as a hierarchy.

Anyways, I'm saying, is that were all writers, we all can do it, and all have great imaginations.
I'm sure you've written some sort of stories, so post them here, whether they are good or not so good.


You all know my character story, I will change it, due to my RL changes I've made.

Here are two stories I have made for two of my friends ar another community, they were in the Yakuza, and they left.
Wu Koang and Ruy Hong.



- Every dog has its day, todays my day and the suns going down. -
Wu Koang

(Cellphone): You gotta leave the family Wu.
Wu: You know i can't leave Yakuza, they'll kill me.
- Five seconds of silence and Wu looks up at the waitress opening the swede red & Yellow drapery, delivering his Sushi -
Wu: Look.... Give me some time to think.
(Cellphone): Alright, Goodbye.

... That's the last i heard from him for a while, atleast this week, It feels like a year...

- Wu finishes up his dinner and leaves the Yakuza compound and driver over into San Fierro to get away from it all, to think to himself. 45 Minutes later he arrives in the northern area of San Fierro, next to the water. He looks around as he gets out of the Grey 4 door sedan and leans against his car, the cool breeze blowing through the trees making a small whistle -

- Wu exhales and stands there for a bit, leaning with his back against the car, overlooking the ocean, the moon's beautiful gleaming light, sparkling at the crests of each small ripple. Wu starts up a conversation inside his head with himself. -

Conscience: ... Wu, you know you gotta get out, before you get killed. You've gone too far now, but there is still a chance to get out!
Wu: I cant! They will kill me if i leave!
Conscience: I know, thats why you don't tell them, go get a couple pairs clothes and move far away from San Andreas, go take a plane in the next couple days before the meeting. This is your only chance Wu!
Wu: What if they find out that im planning to leave?
Conscience: They wont, don't tell anyone, Anyone except who told you to leave.
Wu: ... your right.

- Wu wakes up from his subconscious hypnotic state and looks around to see if anyones around and watching -

Wu says quietly, with a bit of fear to himself "You have to."

- A glass bottle breaks about 20 meters away, Wu ducks down and sits next to the car on the ground with his heartbeat immensly beating, Wu looks left and right paranoid with sweat beads rolling down his face. The sound of laughter fills the air off in the distance, Wu gets up and looks over the hood a bit, trying to stay as hidden as possible. He looks up and sees a group of about 4-5 Goth's down the street a bit, laughing, another glass bottle flys from the back of the group and lands in the street with the same loud bang Wu had heard not 4 seconds ago. Wu sits back down on the ground with his back still against the car and begins to chuckle to himself with a bit of calmness at the moment. Wu knows that he had let the Yakuza down, and at the next meeting, something will happen to him. -

- Wu drives down the street a bit and checks into a small two story hotel near the water. -
- In the room, laying on the bed, still a bit paranoid about a possible hit squad on him, he peers out of the window through the drapes. He sees the same empty Red two door Tomaha door across the street, and the hotel managers Black Premier out front next to his car. Wu shakes his head and walks over to the bed and lays on the bed. The smell of old cigarette smoke is in the air, manifesting his clothes. -

"... It reeks in here...."

- Wu looks around a bit and his eyes settle on the old flashing clock next to the bed on the drawer, It's 12:48AM. Wu thinks about the phone conversation earlier and the conversation with himself for what seemed like all night to Wu. The truth is, Wu fell asleep 2 minutes after looking about the clock -

"You gotta leave the family Wu." Echoes in his mind for a second. Wu looks over at the clock and it reads "4:48AM". Wu lays there in silence with the 40watt lightbulb still dimly shining light over the room, he hears a tiny bit of movement from out in the hall, Two medium sized men kick the door down and burst into the room dressed in Black suits with ski masks, The two men grab Wu and one of the men begins tying his arms & legs up with rope to a chair in the corner. Wu begins to scream "Please no! please! I'm sorry!"
One of the men punches him in the face and wu shuts up. The second man pulls out a small pistol with a silencer on it and aims it in the middle of Wu's forehead. Wu looks at what he can see of the gun and whimpers and intensely shaking. The strong smell of fresh urine fills the air as Wu wet himself. One of the men mutters in Japanese "Pitiful." Wu wimpers some more and says quietly "Please let me go, please"
The man holding the gun leans closer to Wu and says "Oh we will." - The 1st man says to Wu in Japanese "You have disrespected the family Wu, and you will pay with your life." Wu knew this was the hit squad. He thought they might have sent one out on him, and they did.
Wu begins to say "No, No please no" Then it erupts into a loud scream "NOOOOOO!" as the man pulls the trigger. BANG.

- Wu wakes up and sits up quickly, settled in slightly warm urine and his suit damp with sweat -
"It was just a dream...."
- Wu looks around and sees that sunrise is just beginning, and looks over at the clock. 5:43AM. Wu knew what he had to do. -

- Wu went to the store later that day, picked up some jeans and a T-Shirt and a new pair of boxers, later on he goes up to the airport and pays for a plane ticket for Liberty City leaving tomorrow at 10:21AM. -

- 6:37PM, Wu gets a phone call on his cellphone, a small chime fills inside of the car. He picks it up and listens -
(Cellphone): Hello Wu.
Wu: H-Hello, who is this?
(Cellphone): This is Yatzimushu, Will you be attending the meeting tommorow? We are expecting you.
Wu: Yes i will be, ill be there right on time.
(Cellphone): Good.
- Wu dosent say anything and listens to the flatline dialtone for a couple seconds, staring blankly at nothing in particular. -
- He closes his phone and drives to a small restaraunt and orders his food. -

- 8:12PM. Wu takes his cellphone out and calls his friend -
Wu: H-Hello? is this -Wu is cut off-
(Cellphone): Yes, may i ask who is speaking?
Wu: This is Wu, look, i thought about what you were saying.... Im gonna leave.
(Cellphone): Good, do you have a destination? Where are you going?
Wu: I do, im going where you are, im catching the plane tommorow at 10AM.
(Cellphone): Good, call me when you get to the terminal.
(Cellphone): Goodbye Wu.
Wu: Bye...

- Wu looks at the phone as he walks into the bathroom, he exhales as he hangs up and throws the phone in the toilet -

- Wu arrived at the San Fierro International Airport Terminal at 8:52AM. He didnt want to wait around, he decided to get on the plane as soon as possible. -

- Wu doses off for a bit to a quiet plane, with only the airline cleaning crew working, and wakes up just as they are taxing to the runway. "Oh Fuck! i forgot to call him!" he thinks to himself.
"Too late now..."

"thankfully I booked a window seat so I could see the new city I'm arriving in... well, new since the last time I was here..."




- This is our new life, together.  -
Ruy Hong

Ruy: Hey, look man, you know, since Kenichi got assasinated, and that new guy, .... this family, well.... isnt like it was when Kenichi was here.
** (Cellphone): Yea, i know, Look man, i think it was a mistake joining, like, my family back home, they moved now to witness protection, i dont know where they are now...
Ruy: I did some stuff too, i dont really want to speak about it over the phone...
** (Cellphone): Ahh, yea man its no problem.
Ruy: Yea, i mean hey, atleast i didnt give Kenichi HIV, unlike his Wife.
- A mixture of chuckling between the two -
** (Cellphone): I dont know... should i leave? Im not sure what i will do if i stay...
Ruy: You gotta leave the family Wu.
** (Cellphone): You know i can't leave Yakuza, they'll kill me.
- A short silence for about 5-6 seconds -
** (Cellphone): Look.... Give me some time to think.
Ruy: Alright, Goodbye.

"It's been four days since i heard from him. I hope somthing didnt happen..." Ruy said to himself as he sat in the small booth in the corner window of the Small Breakfast Diner, sipping his coffee and looking out of the window watching the snow glide down to the ground. Ruy hears a rather large crash coming from the diner kitchen as his mind zones back into his body, the sound of chatter and laughter, silverware clanking together, the smell of hot syurp, sausage and waffles made it feel warm inside, unlike the weather outside. Ruy looks out the window some more, up at he sign he says to himself quietly "Liberty City's best waffles huh..." as he reaches into his trench coat and pulls his leather wallet out to pay the check. Ruy counts out the check as he puts his cigarette out in the ashtray, and pays the $8 bucks for the food and leaves a $10 for the waitress that served him, as he walks out the waitress dressed in a rather short skirt wearing a white button-up shirt that shows her firey Red Bra purposefully, winks at him.

- Ruy thinks to himself jokingly as he enters his car with the keys in his hand: "Well that was rather odd of the waitress, oh well, maybe im a lucky man". Ruy started his car and pulled out of the parkinglot and headed east twoards the ocean. -

- Driving along the road closest to the ocean, just as the sun is rising and casting its magnificently warm orange rays over the riverbank, the soothing sounds of seagulls cawing in the distance, the horn of the frequenting barges coming into the docks.... "So beautiful" Ruy says as he pulls over into the small parking space on the side of the road. He steps out of the door and looks over towards the sunrise as the Sun's warm rays brush upon his face and the smell of the salt water pleases him. -

- As Wu is sitting on a bench overlooking the river, his Blackberry rings -

(Cellphone): H-Hello? is this -Ruy cuts him off-
Ruy: Yes, may i ask who is speaking?
(Cellphone): This is Wu, look, i thought about what you were saying.... Im gonna leave.
Ruy: Good, do you have a destination? Where are you going?
(Cellphone): I do, im going where you are, im catching the plane tommorow at 10AM.
Ruy: Good, call me when you get to the terminal.
Ruy: Goodbye Wu.
(Cellphone): Bye...

9:34AM, The next morning.
- "Fuck.... why wont he call." Ruy thinks to himself as he sits at the same diner as yesterday, the same booth by the window, looking around for that sexy waitress that winked at him yesterday.
Ruy orders some food, In a slightly depressed state "the usual" he says to the mid-40's waitress that serves him every other day. "What's wrong Mister Hong? You've seemed down the last Two to Three days, are you ok?" The Bella the waitress asked.
"It's my friend, he was suppoed to call me before his plane left from San Fierro to here in Liberty, he hasent called yet" Ruy says slightly depressed in a response to the waitresses question.
"Oh... Well, you never know, maybe his phone died, you gotta stay positive this day and age" Says the waitress three seconds later after Ruy got don speaking.
"Yes i suppose your right Bella, im gonna go up to the terminal later and wait for his plane" Ruy says.

- The waitress smiles and pours him some more coffee as she walks twoards the cook with Ruy's and another mans order of food. He stares at her ass as she walks away. "Jesus... for a woman in her mid forties, she looks DAMN good." he says to himself as he watches a rather large russian man devour three stacks of pancakes as if he hadent eaten in days. Ruy chuckles at the man, trying to hide his laugh. -

6:03PM, Later that day.
- Ruy arrived at Liberty International, and is now riding on the small 10 person shuttle that takes people from the parking lot to the Terminal front. The shuttle arrives and Ruy walks through the doors and a gust of cool air blows from the opening glass doors on him, with a sharp metallic smell in the air, slightly static, Ruy walks in up to the flight Information desk, luckily only two people were there, "Oh god thank you..." he says to himself at the sight of the extremely short line. -

- The woman infront of Ruy, finishes up and walks to the right dragging her screaming child, she was saying somthing, Ruy was watching the small girl resist her mother and screaming, but he could not hear anything, due to the immense amount of chatter between the hundreds of travlers, and the female voice echoing sound of the loudspeakers located throughout the massive airport terminal. Zoned out as he thinks about where Wu is, and if he will arrive, He gets a rather hard shove from behind as a husky guy shouts "Comon man, hurry up!", Ruy apologizes and turns to the extravagant looking asian lady behind the counter in her sexy Navy vest and reading glasses with her hair put up. "Hello ma'am, i would like to know when the flight coming from San Fierro to Liberty willl arrive today, its the one that left at 10AM today", "Luckily for you, thats the only flight coming from San Fierro today sir" She responds and she smiles at him, "Great, do you know when it should be arriving?" Ruy asks. The lady looks at her computer screen and says "Yes it should be landing and pulling in the dock in about 20 minutes". "Thank you so much Ma'am, have a nice day" Ruy says as he walks off. -

- Ruy forgot to ask which dock the plane was landing at, he sprints back over to the desk and bumps into the husky man that pushed him before and asks the lady "Oh i forgot, which dock will that flight be arriving?", "Dock 45-B, Ruy gets pushed away by the large man and he looks back at the woman and smiles, almost tripping himself. -

6:43PM, 20 minutes later.
- People start pouring off the plane, and are being checked by security, Ruy continually scanning the line of men and women coming through the checkpoints for Wu. He sees him and waves him over. -

- Wu walks up and Ruy goes over and hugs him, he dosent care if he looks like a homosexual to others now, he is with his best friend again. "WU!" Ruy shouts as he releases Wu of the hug, "So glad to see you here!". Wu Nods and has a huge smile on his face, "Well, shall we get out of here?" say Wu.
"Sure" says Ruy as the two walk twoards the main entrance for Liberty International.

8:22PM, Later that night.
"Look Wu, i have some jobs lined up for us, were gonna go check them out tommorow, some really good work" Says Ruy as they sit in the car, parked on the side of the road.
"Alright great, Do you have a place to sleep? Im extremely tired now" says Wu in an exausted voice
"Yea i do, lets go, im tired too. Man, its so glad to be away from it all, so glad to be away from Los Santos and... the yakuza..." Say Ruy as he pulls off from the parking spot.

"This is our new life, together."

- The car drives off in the street under the railway tracks, stops at a stop light for a second, and turns left and disappears... -




AND YES, I sat down and typed them up myself!
Any comments on them?
Also, notice how they inter-twine? :P

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Reply #1 on: May 10, 2008, 11:15:27 pm
Nobody writes?

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Reply #2 on: May 11, 2008, 09:55:38 am
i don't think anyone fully read the topic...mainly because there is 2953 words:P yes that is accurate.

uhhh, maybe i will read your story later:P



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Reply #3 on: May 11, 2008, 10:38:28 pm
tl;dr


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Reply #4 on: May 11, 2008, 10:41:19 pm
tl;dr = too long;didnt read



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Reply #5 on: May 11, 2008, 10:57:29 pm
A place for me to get critisism on my bands song lyrics... sounds AWESOME

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Reply #6 on: May 11, 2008, 11:23:22 pm
-Its 4:47 PM in LS many things are going on.
-A man Dials his cellphone ontop of a building.
Cell:Hello?
Man:Jill, its Frank.
Cell: oh hi Frank!
Man:Could you put mom on?
Cell: Ok, sure
Cell:Hello, Frank
Man: Hi mom
Cell:Whats on your mind son?
Man:Nothing I just love you Goodbye mom, Check my droor for a note.
Cell:What?!
Man: i love you all!
--Its 4:49 PM in LS
-He hangs up
-The man jumps off the building.
-A mother and her Young Son are strolling Casually to her grandmothers house.
Boy:Mommy
Mother:Yes Baby?
Boy:Happy mothers day mommy
Mother: thank you baby
-Mother bends to kiss the child
-Out of nowhere the man plummets to his death infront of the two
-The woman Screams at the top of her lungs.
-The boy is silent
Boy:...
-The mother turns to him and embraces him
The time is 4:50 PM
TO BE CONTINUED!
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Idk what i was thinking.
Maybe a Mix of dark humor and mothers day?
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Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 12:23:59 am
"Good morning to all of you". The familiar DJ sounds come out of the radio. But something is strange today. Bruno lies in his bed and thinks about what is different. Suddenly he realises that there is no traffic sounds coming through the open window. No people screaming, laughing, shouting "fuck you".
As he gets up he checks the calendar. It is a normal working day.
He looks out of the window of his shabby, 2 room apartment in the south of a big industrial town and sees nothing but empty streets.
Quickly he turns on the TV, expecting some disaster to have happened while he was sleeping and see the reports.
But the news sho has no unusual stories at all.

He decides to go out and check out the neighbourhood. The streets are deserted and his car is the only one parked. Curious, he drives around.
It already gets frustrating when he hears the traffic report on the radio. According to that he should be in a big traffic jam, but there is nothing but an empty road.
In the middle of the city, he suddenly sees another person for the first time. With screeching tyres he stops and jumps out.

"No rush" says the old man with a twinkle in his eyes. "You will have all eternity to figure out what happened"....

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Reply #8 on: May 12, 2008, 12:44:38 am
Hmm Gandalf, that story sounds familiar...maybe "I am a legend"  :D



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Reply #9 on: May 12, 2008, 01:15:05 pm
"Good morning to all of you". The familiar DJ sounds come out of the radio. But something is strange today. Bruno lies in his bed and thinks about what is different. Suddenly he realises that there is no traffic sounds coming through the open window. No people screaming, laughing, shouting "f**k you".
As he gets up he checks the calendar. It is a normal working day.
He looks out of the window of his shabby, 2 room apartment in the south of a big industrial town and sees nothing but empty streets.
Quickly he turns on the TV, expecting some disaster to have happened while he was sleeping and see the reports.
But the news sho has no unusual stories at all.

He decides to go out and check out the neighbourhood. The streets are deserted and his car is the only one parked. Curious, he drives around.
It already gets frustrating when he hears the traffic report on the radio. According to that he should be in a big traffic jam, but there is nothing but an empty road.
In the middle of the city, he suddenly sees another person for the first time. With screeching tyres he stops and jumps out.

"No rush" says the old man with a twinkle in his eyes. "You will have all eternity to figure out what happened"....

That is really good, it keeps you thinking :D

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