Sorry, but again not very rich roleplay ... 4/10.
You should put some more imagination into your character and make sure you won't mix OOC in IC situations, then you would be a priceless roleplayer.. 
All in all pretty well ok, even though if you write liek: Wtf, omg, u, y, and shit icly but thats just me whos penible. Anyways here I would give you a 10/10. In General 9/10