The Gvardia Family || San Fierro's Main Power || Best criminal group of 09/10/11

[Toto]

Write a decent character story, to show us how serious into RP you are.
Elite was born at the All Saints General Hospital on January 25, 1991. He lived in Temple, Los Santos with his family. On his age 14 his parents died an a car accident. He only have is his grandparents with him. Elite studied hard for his grandparents. As he goes to school he do some little job to help his grandparents at the young age. When he is in college, he also work at The Well Stacked Pizza Corporation to earn more money to help his grandparents pay the bills. Elite graduated college in course that he picked. One day his grandfather was confined to All Saints General Hospital due to Heart Attack. Elite worked so hard just to pay the bills in the hospital. Ones he checked his money it was not enough so he go to San Fierro, rent a room and work in a big company. At all those years of working in the company, Elite got promoted to CEO and brought some luxury cars and a big house. He goes to his grandparents to picked them up to his new house in Downtown, San Fierro. His grandparents were surprise because of Elite is now a successful man. One day On his way to Queens, San Fierro too meet with his friends he notice some guys that are a member in a Mafia called "The Gvardia Family" so he got interested and talk to the members how to join the "The Gvardia Family".

Still 246 words, work a bit more on your story.

[Own.]

Do we need to change it?

[Hugo.]

Do we need to change it?

I think that MannyKhan means you need to elaborate it - Make it 500 words, not change the story.

[Joaoseinha]

Hello.I apologize for my long inactive period.I posted a topic with the reasons on the Speakerbox - Welcome!  section.I may post a link if you wish.

I'm back on the active.


Ognjen_GvardiaT

[duffman]

Ognjen_GvardiaT

The fuck is that name...

[[VM]DKD_BOZZ]

Legends say that Leon_Gvardia still jumps across Flint county, bypassing all the Corleone convoy as if he didn't existed.

Your name.. Alan Wake.
Awesome game

[Ratko Gavrilovic]

Your name.. Alan Wake.
Awesome game

Indeed an awesome game.


Leaving Serbia tomorrow
Inactive during travelling period, which should be 1 or max. 2 days.

See ya.

[Ratko Gavrilovic]

:razz:

what are you

[Candy_Mayne]

Indeed an awesome game.


Leaving Serbia tomorrow
Inactive during travelling period, which should be 1 or max. 2 days.

See ya.

Have fun traveling, bro.  Enjoy it!

[Hugo.]

Leaving Serbia tomorrow
Inactive during travelling period, which should be 1 or max. 2 days.

See ya.

Have fun traveling, bro.  Enjoy it!

Epic escape, Alessandro.

[Ratko Gavrilovic]

Cofi I could have sworn that I've just seen you here in Belgrade.
With the bag and stuff. :conf:

[Murdock]

Spent 5 days in the Navy, got a motored rubber inflatable boat sailor permit in 2 months the big 4-days test series for the Naval Commando Officer Course.
How's everybody's summer?
Post Merge: August 10, 2012, 07:45:19 pmI don't like the new design though

[duffman]

Spent 5 days in the Navy, got a motored rubber inflatable boat sailor permit in 2 months the big 4-days test series for the Naval Commando Officer Course.
How's everybody's summer?
Post Merge: August 10, 2012, 07:45:19 pmI don't like the new design though

You going to the Navy?

[Murdock]

You going to the Navy?

Yes, the IDF Navy.

[Alan.Wake]

First thing that came to my mind was International Diabetes Federation.