The Gvardia Family || San Fierro's Main Power || Best criminal group of 09/10/11

[Eugene]

This started in 1983,Russia. when i born.My parents were drug dealing and were poor.
One day at mine 15th birthday my father had heart attack and died in hospital.
I am with my mother couldnt live anymore because we didnt have any money for food and else..
on day when i decided go to work at cleaning houses and cars i saw a big mafia walking on the road,
they stopped,looked at me and asked:"Hey man what your doing ? " I hardly answered:"w..working sir".
After that they came with question:"Your looking for better job?" i didnt answer,after few seconds they repeated,
Do you need better job ? i said : "yes..."After that i entered their car and we drove to weird cold place,
They showed me their hood and their cars,i was surprised.
After they showed me their places they offered me to sell goods,i was confused and answered:"Yes i will!!".
The men smiled and told me to follow them,after we entered their main house and talked about drug dealing,i started selling them on black market.
First it was not very susecced but after few weeks i sold it better and better and became a good mafioner.
After few monthes that passed and my mother died from infection i became a real drug dealer,started dealing heroin and crack,and earned alot.
I bought a big nice house and a expensive car.
One day my mafia told me that we are going to attack a very big mafia called:"Corleone".
I looked weirdly on the boss and told him,okay.
When we came to the fight mafia,all was around quite and silence,we left the cars 20 Meter from their hood and started running behind their house.We heard their voices but they didnt hear us because we were quite,then my friend Likos quitely entered the door we followed him and hide in one of rooms,then one of their members came of the salon and we jumped on him and taped his mouth with hand and took him to the room.
After all the boss:Violet shouted:"Hey robin, come up" none answered,Violet shouted again loudly:"Robin!! come up now!" but robin didnt answer because he already choked.
I heard Violet saying:"Hey Niko,go check where's Robin,he might be outside."
Niko started run around to look after Robin,but he couldnt find him,but he didnt check one room where Gvardia mafia hides,he entered and i shot his heart with deagle.
Violet heard the shooting and told his members:"Oh My f**king God,all take weapons and find them!!
Gvardia left the room started running and heading to the salon,i started pushing hardly and shooting the Corleone mafia with goal to shoot their leader.
After that Mafs came from other room with shotgun and shoot my boss,Eugene leg.
Eugene screamed hard and i took him on the shoulder heading to car.
After few minutes of fighting i heard Nine shoting O....HHHH Nooooo.oooo.oooo!!!!!! Violet!!
Then i knew that finally Violet shoot,Nine gave up and came with us back to our hood.
When we came back to hood i took medicine and took care of Eugene leg.
After few days Eugene leg got better and better and we took let Nine to go away because he cant do anything because all his members shoot down.
Today Gvardia my mafia is training hard and never give up,even with hard enemies.
                                         -|T-h-e-E-n-d|-
                                |-Writer:Playaro Johnson Gvardia-|

Just read your story....  :redface:

i give you 3/10.
you should of taken more time to write it, make it more organized, use more proper grammar, and you can not write about some things that did not happen IG (like about CM and violet).

re-do your story if you want to have it on the 1st page.

[Dratted]

The Beginning, Russia 1983.

When I was Born, My Parents were Dealers, Poor Dealers. At My 15th Birthday Party my Father had heart attack and Was emmited to Hospital, Later he Died.Living With my Mother We couldnt live like this anymore because We didn't Have Money For Food, Bills, Taxes, We were broke.. I Resulted in my Last Resort, Cleaning, Hotel Rooms and Cars, I Seen These Pack of Men Walking down The Road, They Asked "What are you Doing? Backstreets Washing cars? Tssk" I mananged to Stagger out, "Y-yes Sir", They Laughed, "You need a better Job?" I Replied Coldly "Yes", He Pointed To the Car "Get In", Without an Answer, I Got in, They Brought me A few miles away, Not far, My Mind Was filled with "What If's", "What if I died, What if They Tortured me", No, They Brought me Somewhere Strange, I Asked where I was, They Answered "Home" There was a Pause " You wanted a Job Right? Welcome to Gvardia!" I asked "What Job is this?" They Simply Answered "A Worker" They Didnt Go into Detail, And I wasnt going to ask, They Informed me "You will be Paid Well, At least 20 Times of what you were Paid".

Two Months Later

Little Did I know it, I had become a Dealer of the Family, My Mother Now has a Great Life, As do I, I'm Earning a 5 Figure Sum, Per Day, Although I was not Paid Alot at the Start, I now have Relations Within the Mafia, I thought to my Self, 'Gvardia, My Family' And I am Proud Of it.

One Year Later, Gone Bad

'This is as Bad as its Going to Get' I thought to myself, My Mother was Shot by Another Mafia, Little Did I know It, I Caused this, A Deal Gone Bad, I Found her On the Chair, Lying Peacefully, She Went Quickly, At least I had Something to Thank them for, There was no blood, Drink Spiked Maybe? Shock? Who knows, I Dont, But I was Cold About it, 'I will Kill Whoever Did this' Now I am where I am Today, A Wealthy Dealer, A Proud Family Member, But was it worth it?

Signed

Playa Gvardia (Your own name)


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Shaped it Up a Bit playa =] Hope it helped, I based it On your Orgional (?) Story, Removed the CM Part
 

:ps: I know English isnt Your First Launguage, But you do Speak it well =]

[Carnage264]

Carnage Gvardia
Chief of Security

'When I was young'
Well were do I begin my life aint been a good one yet I couldn't ask for anything else growing up in the streets of N.Ireland is a good way to get tough after all you were all ways fighting over your religion "Catholics" and "Protestant" this war continues every day. at the age of 16 I moved to liberty city and got into a life of crime involving death drugs and theft. I got involved in a gang called "El Diablo" in other word the devils sons. I was 17 at the time young not a care in the world until "that night".

'That Night'
We were sent out to steal a gold Huntley from a man in the hills. it was midnight and usually we would set the place on fire to give it the feeling that hell has come to your home. we got the car and we burnt the house but then I watched the news. the news reporter said " this is a tragic day for all of us here at liberty city a baby at the age of 12 months was killed in a house fire in the hills. the CCTV footage show the "EL Diablo" could of been involved." after that night I packed up my bags and went to start anew in the land of San Andreas.

'San Andreas'
While I was in the "El Diablo" I was giving the name Carnage but my real name is Dean. I decided to drop the name. and then I left for San Andreas. as I was leaving my friend Kody came with me we boarded the plane and started our lives all over again. me and Kody have been friends our whole lives we lived in Ireland together and we moved to LC with each other. now we're going to San Andreas. we landed and we were in the town of Los Santos with no house no job and only 10 thousand in cash. we went to a motel in Jefferson and we were living in peace for about 5 months. then we were getting low on cash. so I decided to go out and look for work. I was working in a 24/7 for a while and I was left to lock up after my shit was over. I was close in up and locked the fuel pumps.  and started to walk home. then a car speed past me at about 40 MPH I saw were it was heading and I followed it I was running but keeping myself stealth. I didn't want to get into trouble with these people it stopped at Ganton and 3 people got out they went by the name of Jim Rix and Joey they were part of a street gang called "GSF" grove street families.

'GSF'
They were quite freighting strapped to the bone with weapons and armour. and there "hood" was filled with cars. this reminded me of my time in LC but I never wanted to go back to that. as I went to turn around I heard someone behind me cock a deagle it was a man that went by the name of "KILLAR" he shouted at me " what do you want" I replied with " nothing I was just passing by" then I ran off. as I was sleeping that night I couldn't help but think about that street gang and that if I could find away to gain their trust I wouldn't need to think about money ever again. I told Kody about this and he said that we should try it. they next day I was going past the graveyard and came across this big building with a garden full of tennis courts and cars. there were about 30 people and they were part of 3 different gangs "Cems" "Stracci" "Corleone"  complete Rivals to "GSF" I noticed the green van that was there it was a call belonging to the GSF boys. I knew that if I got that van I would gain their trust. I looked to Kody and told him about this so we ran as fast as we could got into the van and stole it. I drove that thing as fast as it would go 4th gear 60 MPH around a corner. I was being chased by people in purple cars. I floored the accelerator and got that van to Ganton. I jumped out and shouted to Joey " here you can thank me later" he told his leader Rix and he called me and told me to come to Ganton " grove" I took Kody with me and Rix said. "what you done was brave and it will be rewarded and probly everyone thinks you with us so now you are consider you selves as grove street members. life there was great. drugs and fast cars. that is when I earned enough cash to buy my first car "the slamvan" after a good 10 months at the gang things started to get better I had met good friends I met this man called Cofiliano and when I was with him I gained trust and friendship. then things started to get strange I wouldn't of seen members around the hood as much and at that time I decided to leave the grove street families.

'A Road of my Own'
I decided to bring back the name carnage when I was in GSF but now I was on my own. Kody went back to LC because his mother has taking ILL I was on my own for sure. I kept in contact with the friends that I had. and after a while I found myself a heroin addict. and again I blew all my money and then I had to sell my car. so now I as an addict and broke as a joke. so then I just vanished for a while I was gone for 2 months and in that time I got clean. and got my life back in track and I also heard that Cofiliano had started his own mafia "Gvardia" San Fierro's main power. then I know what I wanted to do with my life I was going to get myself in there.

'Gvardia'
After I got back onto the street and my life in check I decided to hall a cab over to SF and I used the money I had to live in a hotel room. I had went to the Gvardia HQ and there I saw that Killar was there and so was Joey. I thought to myself that I will like this. I went over and asked Joey if Cofiliano was around Joey said he was in his office. I went inside the big building. looked around for the office and when I found it I took a deep breath. I knocked 3 times and then I heard him " Come in" I entered the room and he greeted me with a hand shake and asking were I have been. I told him that I was getting my life back in check and now that I have I asked if there is a possibility that I could join his mafia. He smiled and said well first you will have to prove yourself. I thought to myself I will show him I can do this. after weeks of training I finally done it I made it into Gvardia and all my friends are here. then I met this young fella called Joe. he was quite the player he had a flashy car and by the looks of it a lot of cash. I walked up to him and introduced myself. he said " yeah just another trainee you will be out in no time" I thought to myself that I should probably leave him alone. then I made it to full rank and became a Lt  and at that time I think Joe started to show me some respect we started talking getting drunk together. the kind of stuff that me and Kody would do I saw him as my best friend. then I started to mingle with the rest of the group got to no Eugene really well and not to mention Raykaza we were the most Dominant force in the whole of San Andreas. but with good times also come hard times

'The Hard Times'
As I would guess everyone has hard times, but Gvardia suffered a lot of them. that would be members leaving I thought to myself I'm never going to leave this place no matter what then more members started leaving I thought that it was all over then my Cofi insured us that it will get better we just have to wait it out we all worked hard on getting new members into our mafia and we did it was all going good again. we were getting back to the way it was just a few months before.

'Back On Track'
We all started getting back on track I finally bought me a car again my lovely merit and I had reached the Capo rank. I thought nothing can get better than this boy was I wrong. we started getting things done faster and 2 new mafias moved into San Andreas. and of course they want to wipe out Gvardia there was one occasion that really keeps me happy we were at the HQ and one of the mafia's come and tell us that they rule San Fierro and told us to get out and Cofi laughed and said " Have you met Saint Peter. I think you will like him. he ripped out his combat and shot him to death. then we all were in combat bullets flying everywhere I took cover behind a wall and looked up to see that Joe was shot. I ran over to him but as I reached him a bullet whizzed past me. I looked up and my enemy was standing in front of me he told me not to move I looked at him for about 3 seconds and then I jumped back and took out my deagle and shot. the bullet hit him right in the head and he fell to his death. I went over to Joe insured him that he will be alright. I took him to the hospital and he got stitched up. and was back on his feet in a couple of days. Gvardia ruled again and after a few more months I was promoted again to the highest rank anyone can reach. "Chief of security" I don't take this job lightly and I'm grateful for it. and now I decided it was time to get a house. I bought me a nice little home just beside the HQ and now I was in control. I was one of the most thankful people in the world.

Today...
Now I'm still in Gvardia and have taking my job to the full as I can now helping Joe with training our members and what not. as I write this I say that "I will always fight for Gvardia" I'm never going to leave this place I will die a mafia member.

this is a memo signed by
Carnage Gvardia, underboss.....

 :ps: ino this is already on the front page but i never got a rating so go for it guys  :cool:

[Xander]

Thanks for compliment Arno, i appreciate it. Great stories so far guys, its real decent to read them. Pretty enjoyable. Keep them coming they are doing great.  :hurray:

[Eugene]

To all Gvardia members;

I made Topic in City Hall section about our Downtown Casino and its opening.
Check the link and apply for a job, I need some staff, and you will earn some
money while at it. Looking forward to seeing you guys helping me next time I
open the casino.

Thank you.


 :ps: should I change my forum name to Eugene or keep it O-Dog ?

[Xander]

Don't matter man, thats your choice imo. I mean i know who you are, so should everyone else.(If they read your nick in game its like duh :P). Ill apply for a position at the Casino. Oh and No offense Playa, none at all...But i take it English isn't your native Tongue? If it isn't and you want help with grammar/spelling etc let me know, ill fix it (Lol i don't use Spell check...no need, Forums i used to be on we had a grammar cop, if your post wasn't good enough English ..mine were terrible....he would change it so it made sense but would be a diss to yourself...i learned a lot, grammar and spelling are important.) Figured id offer help to a Family member.

[Eugene]

Promotions

Ethan, and Kraven passed trial and promoted to Rookie Mobster

Playa and Stealth from Rookie to Street Mobster

congrats men!

[Marting_Riggs]

congratz

[4512jth]

Congrats. Also, great shootout with the cops today, I think thats the longest I've been alive, but it was only cause of the pizza place next door 

[Stealth_Killer]

OMG thanks, jezz, i thought it would be a lot tougher...   

[Xander]

Congrats. Also, great shootout with the cops today, I think thats the longest I've been alive, but it was only cause of the pizza place next door  

Yea that shootout was hilarious, me and Rusty had a crazy show down, but he had twice as much life as meh, if i had 1 more combat shot i woulda nailed him. But he got me, switched weapons -.-. We did real good we lasted for so long, waves and waves of cops. Loads of fun, i have to say...Moonbeam's had to be my favorite part LOL...."Fastest Car In Argonath..."  

 :ps: Honestly, I forgot about the Pizza Place...  :roll:

[Stealth_Killer]

too bad i have f*cking vista and crush too much 

[Xander]

too bad i have f*cking vista and crush too much 

What issues you have with Vista? Im running xp(which i hate every xp pc i use, loses its "startup" and i gotta reformat) i crash loads. Today i would join walk to the car, crash. But usually everytime i crashed someone else would too. But yea, what are the problems?

[Stealth_Killer]

the point is that GTA SA does not support Vista, only XP

[Xander]

Something dont seem right....me and my friend put his GTA SA on a PC that had Vista Basic...lemme do a google, ill let you know if i find anything.

Edit: Yea GTA SA does work on Vista, its confirmed by others besides me. Try to run it as an Administrator(Single player .exe and the SA:MP) Also set both as windows XP compatability. But people are sayin it has worked fine, even when they dont mess with it.