Rhymes Room [ HELP US VOTE THE BEST RAPPER READ]

[MrFuture]

All writing pieces, I though it was freestyle topic.-.-

[Billy_Hobo]

All writing pieces, I though it was freestyle topic.-.-

It wasn't really as it says "rhymes room" lol, not "freestyle"

[MrFuture]

We started with freestyle..

[Gerrie = Banned (Daco)]

i got this one story for you to tell
take a seat man, this almost like hell
after hearing this, you might start to trip
cmon man, shut your face and listen a bit

this shit starts when i was walking alone
i was walking, passing home by home
I look to my left, and something i see
i wonder to myself, who might that be?

4 door pulls up, with men loaded up
2 dudes step out, i see they're strapped
im keeping my distance, chillin by my car
cuz i aint sure i wana know who they are

Ill tell you like this, their car was legit
windos all down, with some funky ass beat
paint was white clear, something like milk
chromed out wheels, car was well build

they holding a tools, no wait it was gats
shotgun and AK, man look at those cats
they walk to the trunk, like nothing's around
pop goes the trunk, they're guns hit the ground

one leans in the trunk, pulls something big out
i look at closer, im starting to freak out
something long and skinny, is what i see
hold up, man dammmn! looks like a body to me!

i quetly step back, like i wasnt there
they do their thing, they dont really care
2 seconds past, i was long gone
1 thing i dont wana see to my head, and that thing is a gun

next day im chill, watching 10 o'clock news
a body discovered by them popos and blues
job was well done, by some Gvardia dudes
professional work, nothing, no clues

now here's the conclusion of this horible mess
you see that 4 door, you better stress
dont be a fool, run as hard as you can
trust me, you dont want it, they'll give you pure hell!

You might think hmm, who might that be
Ill tell you 1 secret, those fellas are me!
yea im gvardia, and this is what i be
if you'll live, you better thank me!



I aint no tyson, but i knock yo lights out
lay yo ass out, bitch you got f**ked
I aint no dummy i keep myself strapped
dont see me? nigga look up.

clouds and sky, this is where i be
you just a nigga, and im G O D.
yea you broke, but homie let it be
garbage and trash, you're nothing to me

you think you gangsta, this is what you see?
i tell you like this, you just wanna be me
looket in the mirror, you fake ass G
nigga you dont want it, im the real O.G.

dont stare at me, or you'll regret
I see you at the club, yo ass gets f**ked

FUCKING AWESOME, I'M MAKING A SONG OUT OF THIS.

[Eugene]

Good job Dani, its very nice!

All writing pieces, I though it was freestyle topic.-.-

i dont freestyle, i suck at it.
i take my time and come up with something that will sound nice (5-15min/song)

f**kING AWESOME, I'M MAKING A SONG OUT OF THIS.

thanx
i really took my time on that one, like 40mins or something xD
Post Merge: October 16, 2009, 11:43:18 pmOH EM GEE
20 votes for me X_X

[Boxy]

heres my go, its


yo son i got all da bitches n shit
my dick is so long you can have a bit
im the grand g daddy masta poppa
the sight of me will make you want to fa(short "a")pa
so nigga dont sweat me, ill take you to the cleaners
and youll get shit on by all me leaners
i disrespect white people because
they treated my ancestors like shit, and we had to fight for our cause
so nigga like i said dont mess with me
because up your ass ill shove your house key

[Billy_Hobo]

To Boxy...

Dude, Boxy, what the hell are you doin here, all your gona get is fear, see niga, we bigga, we sicka, why dont you go figa that you dont belong here, never expected an as* like you to trash this topic with your crap, why dont you go back to your room and fap

you still listenin? You gona shit your pants when you see your nothing close to me, see, you already lost, now it cost you respect, wasen't that a failure test, now go die, as you don't wana survive your emo ass thats always gona be last,

I got nothin against ya punk, but when I see shi*s like you, I gota terminate you so you dont wana post again cause once again, its really fu*king lame, you dont wana flame me now, as you just got killed, filled with anger your gona spill till you destroy your home, because I told you out cold, that you dont even deserve to get sold for free, sheesh, go get a life, maybe it'll do you right instead of makin shit rhymes and startin to cry, go do somethin or die, you rotten pie,

I know I aint some biggy to tell you this,, but bi*ch, go find the right room, like funny pictures and post a picture of your bunny face, cause man, that me laugh my a*s off, i am serious, I know now your fu*kin furious, but whatever, I am much more clever, now go cut your sh*tty self, and feel your anger sting and you think, "Why does my life have to be this waaaaaaaay!", cause niga, you seriously gay...

[Vince]

yall foos shoulda been around when i was rappin on ts aw aw yo yo yo james yo

[Voodoo]

To Boxy...

Dude, Boxy, what the hell are you doin here, all your gona get is fear, see niga, we bigga, we sicka, why dont you go figa that you dont belong here, never expected an as* like you to trash this topic with your crap, why dont you go back to your room and fap

you still listenin? You gona shit your pants when you see your nothing close to me, see, you already lost, now it cost you respect, wasen't that a failure test, now go die, as you don't wana survive your emo ass thats always gona be last,

I got nothin against ya punk, but when I see shi*s like you, I gota terminate you so you dont wana post again cause once again, its really fu*king lame, you dont wana flame me now, as you just got killed, filled with anger your gona spill till you destroy your home, because I told you out cold, that you dont even deserve to get sold for free, sheesh, go get a life, maybe it'll do you right instead of makin shit rhymes and startin to cry, go do somethin or die, you rotten pie,

I know I aint some biggy to tell you this,, but bi*ch, go find the right room, like funny pictures and post a picture of your bunny face, cause man, that me laugh my a*s off, i am serious, I know now your fu*kin furious, but whatever, I am much more clever, now go cut your sh*tty self, and feel your anger sting and you think, "Why does my life have to be this waaaaaaaay!", cause niga, you seriously gay...

I swear, I lol'd the brains from me when I read this and saw how you thought Boxy was serious.

[Billy_Hobo]

I swear, I lol'd the brains from me when I read this and saw how you thought Boxy was serious.

  I know he wasn't so wasn't I. LOL.

[Voodoo]

Oh. Usually I think that replies to un-serious people are serious. I was wrong.

[Oliver]

Where's my diss from Hircine?
Post Merge: October 17, 2009, 11:08:53 pmFOUND IT

I feel like sparking it with Oliver so here you go

Yo nigga you ain't got nothin' but a bunch of overused memes
But I got tons of shit like hot lyrics and mad stacks of cream
Nigga f**k you, I'll run up on yo spot with the mask lookin' like Guy Fawkes
Pull out the nickel-plated and rob yo ass right in the middle of yo block
I'm the type of nigga that can bring mad pain to ya
f**k wit me cuz, I'll run ya ass out of f**king Estonia
My rhymes is so hot that the paper catches fire
But ya shits probably not, so nigga better retire
I be bustin' at you first cuz, so ya don't get embarassed
A little young white nigga like me who would of guessed?
That a some white youth can spit some rhymes like these
That could knock out ya tooth and be chillin' like a straight G
So nigga, before you even try, to front keep in mind who is da best
Grab the mic, let my lyrics fly, hittin' ya like bullets to yo f**kin' chest
I'm like my man the GZA, I use my tongue as a sword
I'll f**kin' hang yo ass wit' the f**king microphone cord
Can't even touch my style, something you'll never afford
You from some shack in a village, nigga you f**kin' poor
So nigga I'm a let you go, but just so ya know, don't come at me, nigga
Cause you can't touch my flow, keep it on a low, or I'll pull the trigga

Pretty good actually.
I'm not poor by the way, I'm upper middle class. Richer than you, wigger.

[Fabolous]

PEave nice raps yo but i think eugene wins.

[Amon Ra]

Yo Yo Yo Ma Niggas.....Lets see yall do a rhyme on dis beat yo

[MrFuture]

**Heat** this shit rocks,