I did too, but he deleted the comment.
Can I ask who does think it is better for mine? Not for me, just to stop a child from spamming my comments :roll:.
Some improvements:
-Add decent title+ colour scheme
-Add transition effects, relevant to the purpose
-Add media effects (if relevant to purpose)
-Use program other that Windows Movie maker, such as Sony Vegas, Adobe production studio, Descreet combustion 4. They are more advanced but based around the format of Movie maker (sort of) so can be aquanted with rather easily, with good effects.
-Last but not least- don't spam/ flame other peoples work, especially when you need so much improvement also.