Then Change it to [DoAt]Thunder :?:
[DoAt]Roxy or [DoAt]Foxy for the win......
@Tony
Nice rap, the beginning started me to think as a air alarm warning for some kind of terrorist attack

While I am the bitchy one here; You might higher your voice a bit more, maybe even towards shouting the text, like you have kinda uber ego.
That makes it more strong and doesn't give the whisper idea.
But as I say, sounds pretty good, and take this advice with you as luggage, and use it whenever you think its needed