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[Watti]

Argonath RPG, logo/ symbol   D)



    One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
    One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them.

    Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul,
    ash nazg thrakatulûk, agh burzum-ishi krimpatul.

Picture 2 : wall paper




Picture 3 : Sig



Picture 4 : Back Ground



Picture 5 : logo



critisize them, suggest, good work me

[Tuntis]

I am really sorry to say this, but it's ugly.

First off, you can't read the text.
Second, the "lighting" just gets cut off at the ring.
Third, the statue picture doesn't fit, and shouldn't have a background.

[Watti]

the reason u cant read the text is cause its english if you notciced 1 thing

    One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
    One Ring to bring them all, and in the darkness bind them.

    Ash nazg durbatulûk, ash nazg gimbatul,
    ash nazg thrakatulûk, agh burzum-ishi krimpatul.

the reason i put that there is cause its the same thing ...

2nd i couldnt remeber how to darken the lighting

3 the Argonath statue pic is suppose to be just off the edges .. its a bit blurry for unknown reasons

[Tuntis]

I didn't mean that the text isn't in English, I meant that it's hard to see.

[Watti]

hmm .. what you mean like font?? or colour

and what colour / fonjt do u suggest

[Aragorn]

I think Tuntis ment, that all image made from the cutted small images, and you can see the bords of images...
It is a rule in design: if you make lays from different images, they all must live together on one pic...

In your case, people see that it is just taken 3 images and putted on the bg...

The sign should be yellow with red/gold with fire from my point of vies... Also it is better contrasting then black and dark red or what color is it...

And the sign Argonath RPG I do not see at all... I only understood what it is cos u told me...
Dark blue letters on black bg do not look good...

If you are making the general theme on image - text - text should be very good visible... And effected... Cos it is main part of image...

Thou it is my own opinion as web designer...

[Watti]

Thanks for your oppinions

* picture updated

[Gandalf]

The flame and shadow effects can look cool, but you are overdoing them. Less is more.

[X~Shaheen~X]

The flame and shadow effects can look cool, but you are overdoing them. Less is more.

yeah i kinda got to admit.... it is a little overdone and i cant seem to know where anything is everything is highlighted eg * a whole book highlighted*