Trailer for New Youtube Series

[Robby_Wilson]

Good? Tell me what you think

Trailer For a "New" Series

[Woka]

[Robby_Wilson]

[Woka]

Well,reason being my reaction was that because,i have no idea what is suppose to be about,fix it maybe.

[Robby_Wilson]

Well,reason being my reaction was that because,i have no idea what is suppose to be about,fix it maybe.

The new series is "The Lunch Hour Vlogs" We did them last year, but the principal made us delete all the vids, but we have a new principal, so we are starting them again, by the way, I'm the last one on the vid, in the black shirt

[Woka]

The new series is "The Lunch Hour Vlogs" We did them last year, but the principal made us delete all the vids, but we have a new principal, so we are starting them again, by the way, I'm the last one on the vid, in the black shirt

I know who you are

[Robby_Wilson]

I know who you are

O_e

[Robby_Wilson]

STOP.
MAKING.
STUPID.
TOPICS.

I.
CAN.
MAKE.
ANY.
TOPIC.
I.
WANT.
BECAUSE.
IT.
IS.
A.
PUBLIC.
FORUM.

[Teddy]

Woka is right.

You have a good start with the clipping and overlay black bar and white text.

However;

We don't know what it is about. You need to sell to the viewer why they should be interested in your series.
The opening (wobbling bg) backgrounds don't match the theme of entire video.
There is no title, we don't even know what to look for when it arrives.

Those are the changes I'd start with.

[Robby_Wilson]

Woka is right.

You have a good start with the clipping and overlay black bar and white text.

However;

We don't know what it is about. You need to sell to the viewer why they should be interested in your series.
The opening (wobbling bg) backgrounds don't match the theme of entire video.
There is no title, we don't even know what to look for when it arrives.

Those are the changes I'd start with.

It's more of a trailer for the people who are already subscribed tbh. They all know exactly what it is :P