[SA:MP]-The Hagenov Syndicate -EST 2013

[Demir.]

Where is your HQ, in front of FBI?

Nice topic btw

Yeah, infront of FBI  let's see what we can do at LS now.

Thanks man.

[Dennis.]

Yeah, infront of FBI  let's see what we can do at LS now.

Wrong move.

[Demir.]

Wrong move.

Nope.
i think we will rule temple now...

NOTE:i'm not provoking anyone..

[Silvester]

Nice HQ Lazar best of luck.

[Mazen.]

1)-Your in game name? Mazen.   2)-Your Previous used names? Mazen_Truscello , Mazen. , Mazen Luciano   3) -How long have you been playing ArgonathRPG? Since 8 - 8 - 2011.   4) Do you have a passport and a driving license? Yes , I have.   5)Rate your Roleplay skills -/10 ? 8,5   6)List your families/groups which you was part of them ?I was boss in Truscello family and Capo in Luciano family.   7) What will be your name with "HagenT" Tag? Mazen_Hagen   8)Write a character story (minimum 150 words): I am David Armando I was born in SF near SFFD and my father was Boss in the big Mafia another mafia in SF wanted to kill him they killed all my father's friends My father took me went to LS and bought new house in idlewood in my birth day 14th my father teached me how to drive because my father was the best driver in the world in night some Criminals came to my father's house in idlewood and they wanted money but my father didn't have money they saw my father call cops they killed him and run away I was 18 years old and i can't do any thing i went to my mother in LV She was married Her husband didn't want me in his house in night he fired me out side the house i went to LVFD work a lot of mission's i got some money to buy nice car my father learned me how to drive and my friends in LVFD told me to come with my car to race but i didn't know the road good and i didn't test my car i joined 1st race street to me i didn't win it because i didn't know any thing in it my car wanted to fix i worked Hit man to get some money because i can't work in LVFD again because i told to LVFD i won't to back to you again Some one called me asked me to kill girl her name is Lile she work in LV in Chuck and lucky casino i went to kill her but i couldn't kill her with Desert Eagle because a lot of police man there i went up to the top of building and i killed her by Sinper i ran way to East Los santos i lived there a lot of time and when i was go shopping some one saw me in East LS and he saw me at the building he called the police and told them go to East LS to catch me the policemen went to East LS and searched for me but i was in LS market doing shopping and when i go to home i saw police searching for me i went to SF and person who told me to kill Lile called me to met me at Bayside in 7 o'clock and i went there i met him and i took my money form kill her i fixed my car and My friends in LVFD called to make race street again i went to LV and i won all race Street i bought 100 kg of weed and 50 kg of heroin i went to SF to Sell them Lazar Hagen buy them from me and helped me to get my Passport and my license i looked the Hagen family it's helping all and i bought new cars for races and houses at LV , LS and SF but i met girl in part at LS i went to her and i talked to her about my self and she talked me and we made a new meeting in RC i loved her and she loved me but her father was the leader in LSPD and if he know i love her girl he will kick me form LS and i went to my friend Abdo Hagen and he told me to go away from her but i can't i went to her father and told him i loved her girl he told me to get 1,000,000$ to married her i went to dealers and went to races and casino to married her but my business won't get one million my friends in Hagen gave me a lot of money and told me to back them when i got i went to her father and gave him 1,000,000$ and i married my love but i worked to get money to Hagen and i had got the money and i gave money back to Hagen Family and Hagen are really brothers . Signed; Mazen.

[Dennis.]

Nope.
i think we will rule temple now...


NOTE:i'm not provoking anyone..

Doing it in front of FBI's eyes won't work. Trust me.

[Kewlizm]

  8)Write a character story (minimum 150 words): I am David Armando I was born in SF near SFFD and my father was Boss in the big Mafia another mafia in SF wanted to kill him they killed all my father's friends My father took me went to LS and bought new house in idlewood in my birth day 14th my father teached me how to drive because my father was the best driver in the world in night some Criminals came to my father's house in idlewood and they wanted money but my father didn't have money they saw my father call cops they killed him and run away I was 18 years old and i can't do any thing i went to my mother in LV She was married Her husband didn't want me in his house in night he fired me out side the house i went to LVFD work a lot of mission's i got some money to buy nice car my father learned me how to drive and my friends in LVFD told me to come with my car to race but i didn't know the road good and i didn't test my car i joined 1st race street to me i didn't win it because i didn't know any thing in it my car wanted to fix i worked Hit man to get some money because i can't work in LVFD again because i told to LVFD i won't to back to you again Some one called me asked me to kill girl her name is Lile she work in LV in Chuck and lucky casino i went to kill her but i couldn't kill her with Desert Eagle because a lot of police man there i went up to the top of building and i killed her by Sinper i ran way to East Los santos i lived there a lot of time and when i was go shopping some one saw me in East LS and he saw me at the building he called the police and told them go to East LS to catch me the policemen went to East LS and searched for me but i was in LS market doing shopping and when i go to home i saw police searching for me i went to SF and person who told me to kill Lile called me to met me at Bayside in 7 o'clock and i went there i met him and i took my money form kill her i fixed my car and My friends in LVFD called to make race street again i went to LV and i won all race Street i bought 100 kg of weed and 50 kg of heroin i went to SF to Sell them Lazar Hagen buy them from me and helped me to get my Passport and my license i looked the Hagen family it's helping all and i bought new cars for races and houses at LV , LS and SF but i met girl in part at LS i went to her and i talked to her about my self and she talked me and we made a new meeting in RC i loved her and she loved me but her father was the leader in LSPD and if he know i love her girl he will kick me form LS and i went to my friend Abdo Hagen and he told me to go away from her but i can't i went to her father and told him i loved her girl he told me to get 1,000,000$ to married her i went to dealers and went to races and casino to married her but my business won't get one million my friends in Hagen gave me a lot of money and told me to back them when i got i went to her father and gave him 1,000,000$ and i married my love but i worked to get money to Hagen and i had got the money and i gave money back to Hagen Family and Hagen are really brothers .

Cool story but that is one long-ass sentence!

Maybe you should break it down into sentences and paragraphs. That would make your text more comfortable for the eye. It would also probably increase your chances of being accepted.

Correct punctuation is very important.

[Demir.]

Nice HQ Lazar best of luck.

Thank you.

Doing it in front of FBI's eyes won't work. Trust me.

Let's see.

Signed; Mazen.

 You Application is NOTED. Join the CB 8885 and stick arround with us.
Contact caporegime+ for a test in game.
Good Luck.

[Demir.]

One member of the family, called "chichibung" left the family,and betrayed them.
Lazar went mad, so they was searching for him like 2-3 days.

They found him at the Airport.

He tried to run, but Lazar shot his tires so he almost flipped off with his truck and he gave up.

They bringed him at Temple, Los Santos, exactly at Hagen Headquaters.

Lazar and Abdo sent him to the darkest room so they fought him good till he died.

They dragged the body out to the car and putted him on the car's trunk.

They drove the car to the closest mountain.

Lazar grabbed the shovel from the car's trunk as he started to dig to the ground.

He finished with digging ,so Lazar and Abdo placed the body to the hole and Lazar covered it with the rest of the ground.

Mr.Mazen, i am glad to inform you that after passing a test in game we decided to accept you in the family, Congratulations.
Show your skills and give your best.

Signed;
Lazar Hagen.

[Antonio Vendito]

A photo from yesterday's family meeting.

[Yasko]

Good Job. GUYZ!

[Demir.]

Good Job. GUYZ!

Yeah. Keep in mind what i have said. But keep it private.

[Chichibung0]

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Thanks, that was great...

[Sandi]

Lovely office setup. Who made it ?

[Karmps.]

It's so lovely that the Hagen family is copying my Sultan. This picture is from RS4, i've had the same type of Sultan for years on Argonath, both on RS4 and RS5.