Rhymes Room [ HELP US VOTE THE BEST RAPPER READ]

[Drix]

No, actually i dident, i just started another one with that rhyme, cos i culdent find my rhyme :S
so, i edited it

[Billy_Hobo]

You mofo's still don't get it in yo head,
your life is shattered,
because you rather,
eat shit and get sadder,
day and night,
you always lost the fight,
cause you do nothing right,
everyone hates you at first sight,
only I get the light,
and that's freakin' right,
and ya wearing those tight clothes,
lookin' like whores,
I get fed up,
cause of that way you dress up,
lookin shit sassy,
nothin close to classy,
thats why you failed,
always crawlin,
never be talkin,
always shockin the people around you,
with being one dumb ass foo',
in the eyes of my crew,
your a piece of shit too,
seeming like you grew up in a sewer,
getting shit dropin on ya from all directions,
and every little section,
thats my reflection,
of the dumbass you are,
a slave of a star,
a fag of society
worth nothin more then a grocery bag,
you stupid little failure old hag,
now dont crack,
just go back stickin to sh*t like sap,
and take your little nap,
cause when you wake up,
another shit day for you to shake up,
so for god sake b****,
go die, cause no one will say goodbye.

[Eugene]

you guys are amazazing i didnt know you were all so...black well i tried to be "gangsta" for a while and yer i gotta song

iiii cannot rap for shittt do you know what i just spit?
i like to wear my jeans baggy so the city thinks im real daggy
i smoke blunts so c*nts think im f**ked
truth is..im nothin but a short little white boy with a small bunch of nuts

hangin with the hood kids you know how it is
even tho my familys drivin round in bents
i juss wanna be cool like them dope smokin pigs
gettin caught by 5-0 now i aint got nowhere to live?
damn it feels good to be down in the hood
wit only my clothes and ma glock man iss all good
f**k all dem white b*tches cos now that im wit black kids im black too

BIATCH!

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i liek! rly 
and thanx who voted for me  :redface:

[Hircine]

B*tch why you beefin' we all descend from Africa,
if you ain't stop talkin' shit I'm clappin' ya
Cause nigga I don't play around
f**k wit me, you get hit with rounds
Comin' at me, nigga you from Albania
One of my niggas is like a band of ya
You ain't know shit how I live nigga
You know I'll hit you with the trigga
As I said before I'm just anotha g
Take out the heater and ya'll flee
Me and my f**kin' my crew don't play
Its about what ya do nigga, not say
So nigga we can get it smackin'
Then we'll see whose fightin' skills is lackin
Hit ya ass so hard I leave ya leakin'
Oh shit not the mention I was peakin'
Yeah beat ya b*tch ass tripping on acid
Yo but I'm gonna take the blunt, pass it
I ain't gotta waste no more time on you ho
I'm just lettin' some the other niggas know

just spit it now while high  

[Cofiliano]

Eugene, raped your ass, motherfuckers.  :evil:

[Billy_Hobo]

Its time to tell truth, it can't been pretty, but it will be creepy,
but listen, you grew up, physically, but emotionally smaller,
you may be taller, but act like a dumb sh*t bastard,
you think your fast, but yet you finish last,
never think positive, always negative,
no wonder you saw the world twirl in different directions and separate sections like an infection,
you wanted to become a star, but didn't go far,
planned your life as good as can be, but you failed as you into weed,
now the worst... done drugs, now you addicted, sticken to it and always flippin,
just made the worst mistake of your life, commited a crime, wasted your time, man, now you always trippin,
lost your friends, lost your trend, is this your life's worth? Doing drugs and eating dirt,
you better start over, as you get one chance, which soon will regret, instead you coulda been normal,
but now you struglin for drugs and being a bug, thinkin your a thug,
start over and be a good boy, don't act like a broken toy,
live your joy, not askin you to be the best boy,
but make it worth it, unearth your life,
it's hidden and worth bidden, and I swear I aint shi*tin' or kiddin',
take the chance, make some fans, make some trance,
get some friends, make yourself useful,
dont be cruel, to yourself or others,
dont stutter, life may be a clutter,
but fix it, live it, dont do drugs and never get into that whole sh*t!

[Eugene]

Its time to tell truth, it can't been pretty, but it will be creepy,
but listen, you grew up, physically, but emotionally smaller,
you may be taller, but act like a dumb sh*t bastard,
you think your fast, but yet you finish last,
never think positive, always negative,
no wonder you saw the world twirl in different directions and separate sections like an infection,
you wanted to become a star, but didn't go far,
planned your life as good as can be, but you failed as you into weed,
now the worst... done drugs, now you addicted, sticken to it and always flippin,
just made the worst mistake of your life, commited a crime, wasted your time, man, now you always trippin,
lost your friends, lost your trend, is this your life's worth? Doing drugs and eating dirt,
you better start over, as you get one chance, which soon will regret, instead you coulda been normal,
but now you struglin for drugs and being a bug, thinkin your a thug,
start over and be a good boy, don't act like a broken toy,
live your joy, not askin you to be the best boy,
but make it worth it, unearth your life,
it's hidden and worth bidden, and I swear I aint shi*tin' or kiddin',
take the chance, make some fans, make some trance,
get some friends, make yourself useful,
dont be cruel, to yourself or others,
dont stutter, life may be a clutter,
but fix it, live it, dont do drugs and never get into that whole sh*t!

ok now where did you rip this off from?  :trust:

 :ps: watch out peeps, im cooking somethin up right now, its gana be hot :P

[Hircine]

Is it directed at me because I will destroy this nigga...I didn't even come at him

[Eugene]

hey there fellas, how you doing, guess who's back
and this aint another gay shit you hear today that's really wack
im sick and tired of all ya here fighting, and all the fuss
talking about drugs and all the niggas that you like to bust'

Hiricane and Future, wasup with all the 'bitch' and f**k'
and here comes Dani, is this how you really like to act?
your style is oooooooooooold,  switch it up a bit
go on try it, maybe now the lines will do a better fit

hold on a sec, dont get me wrong
i know your swagger, your rhymes are cold
be chill just try it, and you will see
become the one, you wanted to be

ok we're done here, now whats next,
oh yea i hear you peeps, you call me best
i feel that and respect that, its all for the hood
you are my peoples, and its all good

i know i aint biggy, not even pac
i try my best and thats a fact
and just like jay-z, its a life of a hard knock
chill out jigga, its your line, and ill bring it back

i see you drix, so ye wasup?
i hear your rhymes, and it aint wack
remind me of my homie, they called him Black.
there was a thing, but f**k it, thats a past

thats right you heard me, its your boy Eugene
and dont be laughing i aint no Charlie Sheen.
its all supose to be hardcore, but i aint feelin' this
go ahead try me, so i can kill you on your own diss
and my ass will be the only thing thats left for you to kiss

[Squeak]

I figure I'll throw my two cents in as well. I sort of set it to "Six Feet Deep," by the Geto Boys, but I can't find the instrumental for the life of me.
Sometimes I roll slow and give it a second thought
As the helicopter whirls by, I stop and wonder who they just caught
And I walk on by, I see the tears roll down from her cheeks
The woman who just lost her baby boy to the streets
A drive by, somethin' that happens very often
The woman now has to put her son six feet underneath in a coffin
When I turn the corner, I see five thugs, contemplating and drinkin' brew
Just plottin' revenge, cerebrating on what to do

Paul bearers all done up in black suits
Everyone giving their condolences to the mother of the youth
Shit doesn't matter though, because my friend is dead
The mother lowers her lips onto her son's head
Givin' him a last kiss
Seein' my homie alive and well again is my only wish
And it pains me to see, my partner lowered into the ground
The thud of a pound is the only sound
To be heard, the noise of his mother hittin' the casket
Seven shots, delivered straight through his jacket
But, it's a sad reality that we have to face
Get caught at night and you're bound to catch a case
Just a sad and tragic reality for the nameless youth, Peace.

[SeanC]

hey there fellas, how you doing, guess who's back
and this aint another gay shit you hear today that's really wack
im sick and tired of all ya here fighting, and all the fuss
talking about drugs and all the niggas that you like to bust'

Hiricane and Future, wasup with all the 'bitch' and f**k'
and here comes Dani, is this how you really like to act?
your style is oooooooooooold,  switch it up a bit
go on try it, maybe now the lines will do a better fit

hold on a sec, dont get me wrong
i know your swagger, your rhymes are cold
be chill just try it, and you will see
become the one, you wanted to be

ok we're done here, now whats next,
oh yea i hear you peeps, you call me best
i feel that and respect that, its all for the hood
you are my peoples, and its all good

i know i aint biggy, not even pac
i try my best and thats a fact
and just like jay-z, its a life of a hard knock
chill out jigga, its your line, and ill bring it back

i see you drix, so ye wasup?
i hear your rhymes, and it aint wack
remind me of my homie, they called him Black.
there was a thing, but f**k it, thats a past

thats right you heard me, its your boy Eugene
and dont be laughing i aint no Charlie Sheen.
its all supose to be hardcore, but i aint feelin' this
go ahead try me, so i can kill you on your own diss
and my ass will be the only thing thats left for you to kiss

Ok Eugene I just heard ya shit,
but mate your gonna have to do better when ya spit,
this is the rap game, the shit you spit is lame, you'll never see fame,
the words you spit are just too tame,
acting tough and being tough just ain't the same.
Now let me teach you some shit that gonna get ya far, freestyles gotta come from the heart,
spit the meanest shit that make people depart,
spit the rhymes that go straight through your mind,
lines so devine they make people quit crime and realize its their time to shine.

[Billy_Hobo]

ok now where did you rip this off from?  :trust:

 :ps: watch out peeps, im cooking somethin up right now, its gana be hot :P

I ripped that off from someone?  :conf:

[MrFuture]

Nice rhymes Eug,They rock
Billy i think Eug is right.

[Oliver]

*MC EFG and DJ Martu have entered the building.*

Now, this is a story all about how
My life got flipped-turned upside down

[ElMartu]

And I liked to take a minute
Just sit right there