The Montana Crime Family *New* [Recurits Needed]

[Romeo]

You're very capable Davron, It's your time to shine.
You're one of the best leaders i've ever encountered... not a bad bone in your body.

Goodluck from your old mob boss.

[Davron]

Thanks Man that mean alot =]

[johany]

Name:Johany_Johstanel
Family Name(e.g Kent_Montana):Johany_Johstanel
How active are you:everyday 3-4 hours
Do you have RPG experience:perfect
Brief Character Story:I was bron I california, raised by farmers, i was nicknamed JJ and left my home fr vice city. They called it the land of opportunity. so i took my chances and failed,
Next thing i knew, i had heard of the montana crime family, i wanted to join, feel the thrill of doing crimes,and having fun makeing cash.

[Davron]

Name:Johany_Johstanel
Family Name(e.g Kent_Montana):Johany_Montana
How active are you:everyday 3-4 hours
Do you have RPG experience:perfect
Brief Character Story:I was bron in california, raised by farmers, i was nicknamed JJ and left my home fr vice city. They called it the land of opportunity. so i took my chances and failed,
Next thing i knew, i had heard of the montana crime family, i wanted to join, feel the thrill of doing crimes,and having fun makeing cash.

Noted.Show us what you can do and ur considered.

[Kamarat10]

Hey guys I am back! Whats new?

[danigold1]

Hey guys I am back! Whats new?

well, most of the games ended as a tie...  :roll:

[heebotus]

                                                     before reading remember this is not what happend
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What happend to Kent?

My idea what happend to him: (

first there was Kent and some Body guards  :cool: ( = kent)  (= body guards)
then there drived some other mafia, they was enemy  :poke: (= enemy1)  :devroll: (= enemy2)

First  :poke: taked gun and he comed and shooted Body guards  then  :devroll: comed and tryed to shoot  :cool: but  :cool: taked gun and shooted  :devroll:  :m4: then  :poke: taked other gun and tryed to shot  :cool:  but!  :cool: shot  :poke: then   :cool: 's heard stop and  :cool: was dead too

[Davron]

                                                     before reading remember this is not what happend
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What happend to Kent?

My idea what happend to him: (

first there was Kent and some Body guards  :cool: ( = kent)  (= body guards)
then there drived some other mafia, they was enemy  :poke: (= enemy1)  :devroll: (= enemy2)

First  :poke: taked gun and he comed and shooted Body guards  then  :devroll: comed and tryed to shoot  :cool: but  :cool: taked gun and shooted  :devroll:  :m4: then  :poke: taked other gun and tryed to shot  :cool:  but!  :cool: shot  :poke: then   :cool: 's heard stop and  :cool: was dead too

Dude That is Some OLD times...

Name:Johany_Johstanel
Family Name(e.g Kent_Montana):Johany_Johstanel
How active are you:everyday 3-4 hours
Do you have RPG experience:perfect
Brief Character Story:I was bron I california, raised by farmers, i was nicknamed JJ and left my home fr vice city. They called it the land of opportunity. so i took my chances and failed,
Next thing i knew, i had heard of the montana crime family, i wanted to join, feel the thrill of doing crimes,and having fun makeing cash.

I havn't seen this guy ingame...Have any one else saw him?

[Kamarat10]

Nope..

[ShortyE]

                                                     before reading remember this is not what happend
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What happend to Kent?

My idea what happend to him: (

first there was Kent and some Body guards  :cool: ( = kent)  (= body guards)
then there drived some other mafia, they was enemy  :poke: (= enemy1)  :devroll: (= enemy2)

First  :poke: taked gun and he comed and shooted Body guards  then  :devroll: comed and tryed to shoot  :cool: but  :cool: taked gun and shooted  :devroll:  :m4: then  :poke: taked other gun and tryed to shot  :cool:  but!  :cool: shot  :poke: then   :cool: 's heard stop and  :cool: was dead too

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA I'M f**kING LAUGHING MY ASS OFF THIS IS SOOOO f**kING HILARIOUS!

Moderator Comment

As well as on the server, do not use caps like this in your posts...- Fabio

[Denlow]

                                                     before reading remember this is not what happend
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What happend to Kent?

My idea what happend to him: (

first there was Kent and some Body guards  :cool: ( = kent)  (= body guards)
then there drived some other mafia, they was enemy  :poke: (= enemy1)  :devroll: (= enemy2)

First  :poke: taked gun and he comed and shooted Body guards  then  :devroll: comed and tryed to shoot  :cool: but  :cool: taked gun and shooted  :devroll:  :m4: then  :poke: taked other gun and tryed to shot  :cool:  but!  :cool: shot  :poke: then   :cool: 's heard stop and  :cool: was dead too

Haha, I like it 

[Emre]

The story's grammar is maybe funny,but the sense isnt so bad

I will try to re-write it :

One may-afternoon,Kent,sitting in his Office,inside the Mansion in Starfish,arranging Meetings and Throwing out unloyal Members.But what he doesn't Know,is that the Goons have made Connections and Brotherships with Other Groups,secretly.Therefor,the Ex-shooters Were having a Chat with their Friends,affording to give a Bag,full of $2,000,000 ,if they Get their Old Boss,Kentonio.They have also said,the assaulting won't be fun,if they don't Join.The following morning,Kent,Neal,Dani,Emre and Rokky are sitting at the couch of the Fun-Room,Playing Billiard and Cards.In the Meanwhile,2 Red Vans arrive,each including 4 Assasinators and start to assault two Guards,which kept the Entrance protected,until that moment.The 5 Players did not observe any noise and kept on Playing.While them Hunters shoot around and Try to find The Jefe,Them 5,start to Hear the sounds of Machine Guns.At once they stop Playing and run to the Chamber,where their Guns are stored,to Protect themselves.Equipped they walk back and in the Moment,they enter the Room again,they Meet up with 4 Ex-Members,and 4 Hitmen.The Shootout starts,and the walls are getting Holed.The First Person,who Dropped Blood,and Died in the Same Moment,was The First Hitman.The Shootout lasted atleast half an hour,between shoutings like "Give it Up!!" and "Capitulate!!".Within the Next Few Minutes,it Hit 2 Ex's and 3 Hitmen,deadly.Dani and Rokky,laying on the ground,being Hit,try to crouch somewhere Save,while Kent runs to the Billiard table,where they are supposed to be Hidden.Unluckily,he was Wrong,and One,of the Remaining 2 Ex-Goons,Shot him from the Back with a Benelli Shotgun.Having no Chance to Survive,Kent falls on the Ground.It Was on : 2 Versus 2.Neal and Emre grab their M4's and start to shoot,mis-hitting them.While for a minute there was no Fire,People think about,how Kent fell down,Moments ago.Neal Getting in Rage,Runs across the room and shoots around,trying to hit them Somehow.Emre attempts to give them Backup but startles,when he heard gunshots,Coming from a whole different side of the Room,It were Dani and Rokky,Giving Neal Backup.Emre,running after them,looks around,to make sure,the Hitmen won't play a Game with them.The Four of them Find them,and in that Point,the guns sound again.The Four Ex's,the Hitmen And Kent ,being Dead,and In the meanwhile,the Four of them,being hit,All in the Same Room.They still can't believe it all.Walking outside and trying to get rid of all,they Talk about the Future of the Family.They Decide to make a Voting,where all Agreed on the Suggestions of Ranking.Them all gratulating eachother for such a Teamwork,look forward now.
And they all lived happily ever after.()
Post Merge: June 17, 2010, 01:23:41 pmI wrote this,cos i got Bored,so don't criticize

[danigold1]

                                                     before reading remember this is not what happend
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What happend to Kent?

My idea what happend to him: (

first there was Kent and some Body guards  :cool: ( = kent)  (= body guards)
then there drived some other mafia, they was enemy  :poke: (= enemy1)  :devroll: (= enemy2)

First  :poke: taked gun and he comed and shooted Body guards  then  :devroll: comed and tryed to shoot  :cool: but  :cool: taked gun and shooted  :devroll:  :m4: then  :poke: taked other gun and tryed to shot  :cool:  but!  :cool: shot  :poke: then   :cool: 's heard stop and  :cool: was dead too

were you trying to make this like a book with pictures, or were you to lazy to just write the names a few times... 

[Davron]

The story's grammar is maybe funny,but the sense isnt so bad

I will try to re-write it :

One may-afternoon,Kent,sitting in his Office,inside the Mansion in Starfish,arranging Meetings and Throwing out unloyal Members.But what he doesn't Know,is that the Goons have made Connections and Brotherships with Other Groups,secretly.Therefor,the Ex-shooters Were having a Chat with their Friends,affording to give a Bag,full of $2,000,000 ,if they Get their Old Boss,Kentonio.They have also said,the assaulting won't be fun,if they don't Join.The following morning,Kent,Neal,Dani,Emre and Rokky are sitting at the couch of the Fun-Room,Playing Billiard and Cards.In the Meanwhile,2 Red Vans arrive,each including 4 Assasinators and start to assault two Guards,which kept the Entrance protected,until that moment.The 5 Players did not observe any noise and kept on Playing.While them Hunters shoot around and Try to find The Jefe,Them 5,start to Hear the sounds of Machine Guns.At once they stop Playing and run to the Chamber,where their Guns are stored,to Protect themselves.Equipped they walk back and in the Moment,they enter the Room again,they Meet up with 4 Ex-Members,and 4 Hitmen.The Shootout starts,and the walls are getting Holed.The First Person,who Dropped Blood,and Died in the Same Moment,was The First Hitman.The Shootout lasted atleast half an hour,between shoutings like "Give it Up!!" and "Capitulate!!".Within the Next Few Minutes,it Hit 2 Ex's and 3 Hitmen,deadly.Dani and Rokky,laying on the ground,being Hit,try to crouch somewhere Save,while Kent runs to the Billiard table,where they are supposed to be Hidden.Unluckily,he was Wrong,and One,of the Remaining 2 Ex-Goons,Shot him from the Back with a Benelli Shotgun.Having no Chance to Survive,Kent falls on the Ground.It Was on : 2 Versus 2.Neal and Emre grab their M4's and start to shoot,mis-hitting them.While for a minute there was no Fire,People think about,how Kent fell down,Moments ago.Neal Getting in Rage,Runs across the room and shoots around,trying to hit them Somehow.Emre attempts to give them Backup but startles,when he heard gunshots,Coming from a whole different side of the Room,It were Dani and Rokky,Giving Neal Backup.Emre,running after them,looks around,to make sure,the Hitmen won't play a Game with them.The Four of them Find them,and in that Point,the guns sound again.The Four Ex's,the Hitmen And Kent ,being Dead,and In the meanwhile,the Four of them,being hit,All in the Same Room.They still can't believe it all.Walking outside and trying to get rid of all,they Talk about the Future of the Family.They Decide to make a Voting,where all Agreed on the Suggestions of Ranking.Them all gratulating eachother for such a Teamwork,look forward now.
And they all lived happily ever after.()
Post Merge: June 17, 2010, 01:23:41 pmI wrote this,cos i got Bored,so don't criticize

Nice!

[djars_montana]

Name:Arslan
Family Name(e.g Kent_Montana):djars_montana
How active are you:everyday
Do you have RPG experience:Very Good
Brief Character Story:Dj ars is a music maker. and he is making so many music and i want to become an admin i have request plz i m good player in vcmp i like argonath rpg server before 1 year plz gve me authrioty of admin...

Thanks Admin